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How Michael Jackson became famous?
I am going to speak about Michael Joseph Jackson, been born on August 29th, 1958 to Gary in Indiana. He died on June 25th, 2009 in 50 years to Los Angeles in California. He is the seventh child on nine of the family. His father is Joseph Jackson and her mother Katherine Scrune. It was an actor, a composer, interprets dancer, choreographer, and American actor. He had several music styles among which the disco, the funk, the hip-hop, the new jack swing, pop … exectera
Jackson had an authoritarian father is inflexible. He expressed in an intervention in 2003 when his father mistreated them physically and mentally. He laughed many of Michael's nose, he called it "Big nose". Michael suffered from multiple emotional difficulties, nightmare, disorder of sleep, lack of self-confidence, and tended to remain childish. By account, music is very present in the family. Their uncovered father whom these sons had of the talent in the daytime or Tito had broken a rope of his guitar and to oblige to show what he knew how to make.
He began playing in the group “The Jackson Five” in 1964, composed of these four older brothers and himself. Michael becomes the lead singer thanks to his voice more mature than his age. He then happens and wins all compete to which they participate. In 1918 Berry Gordy, president of the Motown Music label summoned the "Jackson Five" for an audition, and decided on the entrants. In 1969, the group was officially presented to the press by Diana Ross. Their first national hit was a song composed by Joseph Jackson, “I Want You Back,” which appeared on their first album Diana Ross Présents The Jackson 5. Jackson Five’s fame keeps growing and young Michael became the audience’s favourite.
At the same time as singing for the band, he began a solo career in 1972-1973.
Michael Jackson and especially became known thanks to his second album Thriller in 1982 when the Jackson split. We call him and we always call him “The king of pop”.
I chose Michael Jackson because he’s a person I listen to before I always listen now, he made my childhood. I decided to develop this moment of his life, because for me a career start and important if we want to make ourselves known and he had a very good start.
pouvez-vous jetez un œil a mon travaille en anglais pour le bac pour savoir si les phrases sont correcte, si elles sont bien former merci
How Michael Jackson became famous?
I am going to speak about Michael Joseph Jackson, been born on August 29th, 1958 to Gary in Indiana. He died on June 25th, 2009 in 50 years to Los Angeles in California. He is the seventh child on nine of the family. His father is Joseph Jackson and her mother Katherine Scrune. It was an actor, a composer, interprets dancer, choreographer, and American actor. He had several music styles among which the disco, the funk, the hip-hop, the new jack swing, pop … exectera
Jackson had an authoritarian father is inflexible. He expressed in an intervention in 2003 when his father mistreated them physically and mentally. He laughed many of Michael's nose, he called it "Big nose". Michael suffered from multiple emotional difficulties, nightmare, disorder of sleep, lack of self-confidence, and tended to remain childish. By account, music is very present in the family. Their uncovered father whom these sons had of the talent in the daytime or Tito had broken a rope of his guitar and to oblige to show what he knew how to make.
He began playing in the group “The Jackson Five” in 1964, composed of these four older brothers and himself. Michael becomes the lead singer thanks to his voice more mature than his age. He then happens and wins all compete to which they participate. In 1918 Berry Gordy, president of the Motown Music label summoned the "Jackson Five" for an audition, and decided on the entrants. In 1969, the group was officially presented to the press by Diana Ross. Their first national hit was a song composed by Joseph Jackson, “I Want You Back,” which appeared on their first album Diana Ross Présents The Jackson 5. Jackson Five’s fame keeps growing and young Michael became the audience’s favourite.
At the same time as singing for the band, he began a solo career in 1972-1973.
Michael Jackson and especially became known thanks to his second album Thriller in 1982 when the Jackson split. We call him and we always call him “The king of pop”.
I chose Michael Jackson because he’s a person I listen to before I always listen now, he made my childhood. I decided to develop this moment of his life, because for me a career start and important if we want to make ourselves known and he had a very good start.
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- How Michael Jackson became famous?
I am going to speak about Michael Joseph Jackson, been born on August 29th, 1958 to Gary in Indiana. He died on June 25th, 2009 in 50 years to Los Angeles in California. He is the seventh child on nine of the family. His father is Joseph Jackson and her mother Katherine Scrune. It was an actor, a composer, interprets dancer, choreographer, and American actor. He had several music styles among which the disco, the funk, the hip-hop, the new jack swing, pop … etc.
Jackson had an authoritarian father is inflexible. He expressed in an intervention in 2003 when his father mistreated them physically and mentally. He laughed many of Michael's nose, he called it “Big Nose”. Michael suffered from multiple emotional difficulties, nightmare, a disorder of sleep, lack of self-confidence, and tended to remain childish. By account, music is very present in the family. Their uncovered father whom these sons had of the talent in the daytime or Tito had broken a rope of his guitar and to oblige to show what he knew how to make.
He began playing in the group “The Jackson Five” in 1964, composed of these four older brothers and himself. Michael becomes the lead singer thanks to his voice more mature than his age. He then happens and wins all compete to which they participate. In 1918 Berry Gordy, president of the Motown Music label summoned the “Jackson Five” for an audition, and decided on the entrants. In 1969, the group was officially presented to the press by Diana Ross. Their first national hit was a song composed by Joseph Jackson, “I Want You Back,” which appeared on their first album Diana Ross Presents The Jackson 5. Jackson Five’s fame keeps growing and young Michael became the audience’s favorite.
At the same time as singing for the band, he began a solo career in 1972-1973.
Michael Jackson and especially became known thanks to his second album Thriller in 1982 when the Jackson split. We call him, and we always call him “The king of pop”.
I chose Michael Jackson because he’s a person I listen to before I always listen now, he made my childhood. I decided to develop this moment of his life because for me a career start and important if we want to make ourselves known, and he had a very good start.
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