Pouvez vous me dire si c'est bon ? je devais écrire un email pour mes parents

Dear mom and dad, how are you doing? I am doing great! I'm liking paris very much because it's very beautiful,relaxing/calm and the people are very nice. I recently visited the Eiffel Tower and it is beautiful, especially at night !
the weather here is very different, it is currently snowing and it's freezing cold
I also tasted french cuisine and it's delicious especially snails ( c les escargots) i'm coming home tomorrow so today, i'll take advantage of my day! talk to you soon, lots of love, omayma