Pouvez vous me dire si c'est bon ? je devais écrire un email pour mes parents Dear mom and dad, how are you doing? I am doing great! I'm liking paris very much because it's very beautiful,relaxing/calm and the people are very nice. I recently visited the Eiffel Tower and it is beautiful, especially at night ! the weather here is very different, it is currently snowing and it's freezing cold I also tasted french cuisine and it's delicious especially snails ( c les escargots) i'm coming home tomorrow so today, i'll take advantage of my day! talk to you soon, lots of love, omayma
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imene44
First: its better to say (people) instead of (the people) and replace the word cuisine with (food) je pense qu'il est bien tu doit seulement effectuer ces deux changements
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imene44
ok you said : and the people are very nice
you should say : and people are very nice
you said : french cuisine
you should say : french food or meals
imene44
ok : remplace (the people) par (people)
et (cuisine) par (food)
treees simple a faire
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and replace the word cuisine with (food)
je pense qu'il est bien tu doit seulement effectuer ces deux changements