Correcter moi cette introduction si y a quelque chose faux, c'est pour mon examen de production en anglais demain ! Pour mon essay sur les avantages et les désavantages de la télé.
Since the existence of humanity on earth,human beings struggle to prove themselves to be true.It's true that humanity has seen a succession of crises,wars and atrocities, but this negative side is offset by advances in technology and cultural exchanges,and nowadays,it has become appallingly obvious that our technology has exceeded our humanity.Furthermore,they intended to invent new things,such as TV. Like many other electronic devices,TV present benefits and nuisances. What can they be?!
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From the mankind's existence (on earth you do not need to say on earth),human beings struggle and find out the truth.(struggle to prove themselves to be true). Indeed (It's true) humanity went through a a series of major crises (succession of crises) such as war crimes and atrocities, but this negative side is offset by technological advances and cultural exchanges. Nowadays,it has become appallingly obvious that our technology has exceeded our humanity. Furthermore,(they???) it intended to invent,design and build new things such as transmitting imagesthrough air, an insight that led to television.. developing many other electronic devices, Watching TV presents pros and cons (benefits and nuisances). What can they be?!
Pros of watching TV: The positive aspects of watching television could help exchange opinions on a common programme with your family and your friends. Another positive aspect is that you could can select your programme. Furthermore you can extend your knowledge on any kind subjects that could be helpful for your personal and school education.
Cons of watching TV Watching TV too long could affect your health and futhermore your social life. You may get isolated in watching TV. You may also get addicted to watching TV, you may not able to reduce the time of watching TV. You could watch anything even though that it is not that interesting. Watching TV too long can prevent you from physical exercise which could affect your health.
Conclusion: As long as you select your programme and only watch it that is OK for your health and prevents you from being addicted to watching TV.
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Pros of watching TV:
The positive aspects of watching television could help exchange opinions on a common programme with your family and your friends. Another positive aspect is that you could can select your programme. Furthermore you can extend your knowledge on any kind subjects that could be helpful for your personal and school education.
Cons of watching TV
Watching TV too long could affect your health and futhermore your social life. You may get isolated in watching TV. You may also get addicted to watching TV, you may not able to reduce the time of watching TV. You could watch anything even though that it is not that interesting.
Watching TV too long can prevent you from physical exercise which could affect your health.
Conclusion:
As long as you select your programme and only watch it that is OK for your health and prevents you from being addicted to watching TV.