Bonjour, je sais pas si le texte doit être au prétérit ou pas mais j'ai fais au passé.
´´Ron Weasley I'm so angry with you! Your room isn't tidy : You need to clean it! Look at your bed! You must make your bed. There are a lot of papers in your room, you ate a lot of sweets and chocolate. Your rat is completely crazy because you fed him too much. He needs exercices! Your marks in Dark Arts are unacceptable, you have to work better! I'm very angry!
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Bonjour, je sais pas si le texte doit être au prétérit ou pas mais j'ai fais au passé.´´Ron Weasley
I'm so angry with you! Your room isn't tidy :
You need to clean it!
Look at your bed! You must make your bed.
There are a lot of papers in your room, you ate a lot of sweets and chocolate.
Your rat is completely crazy because you fed him too much. He needs exercices!
Your marks in Dark Arts are unacceptable, you have to work better!
I'm very angry!