Hello !! Happy new year la team !! Si je vous demande de l’aide la team aujourd’hui c’est que j’ai un projet d’anglais sur les “ pesticides” , je l,ai déjà fait et je voudrai avoir votre avis sur mon projet , s,il vous plait je voudrais un avis très objectif, me dire ce qui va et ce qui ne va pas !! N’hésitez surtout pas ! Je veux que ce projet soit “ parfait” ( c’est un projet oral , mais en dessous c’est la feuille que je dois rendre à mon professeur, et que je “ réciterez” en cours )(niveau 3 ieme)
Projet: The pesticides are an substance who he kill bacteria and weed Pesticides are used to protect field He exists three principal categories of pesticides. The fungicide The herbicides The insecticides And more For example the insecticides are used to kill insects in a field Manufacturers are search to create new pesticides because now pesticides are very bad for health and for the nature These pesticides will be good for health and nature In the world asian countries are used lot of pesticides for farm They have polluted too much field and now there is lot of deaths because people who eat vegetables are intoxicated Pesticides also pollute the atmosphere and air They kill lot of animals and humans Pesticides are expensive to buy and export
To conclude: pesticides are harmful for health of humans and animals , they are very expansive,they pollute earth but they are practice to protect farm to insects
Maybe In the future , pesticides will not bad for health and nature
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cam333
Je trouve que c est excellent juste à la fin met tu conclude them the pesticides... Et toujours à la fin t'ajoute un grain pas pour le futur
ssalingue
Genre un truc comme ça...: “Pesticides are harmful for health we should help earth ! We should try to not used pesticides and life of humans and animals”
cam333
bravo bébé tro bien non wqllqh c est hyper bien ❤️❤️❤️
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Bonjour, a ppart quelques fautes c'est très bien :
- Who he kill = Who kill
- He exists = There are
- In the world... intoxicated = At the asian countries, people use pesticides a lot and it's a probleme because people are intoxicated
Pesticides will not = pesticides will not be