Hi I want to write a paragraph about a time I helped a friend who had a problem or was in trouble. I have to tell what was the true problem was and how i helped them. Do not forget to include a title, topic sentence, detail sentences and a concluding sentence 6 to 8 lines thank you for helping me
one day my friend was called out of class by the principal. Everyone was surprised but her, she acted like this wasn't surprised by the incident,it's like she already knew what the caused this to happen.
As the whole class watched her get out i sneekingly stepped out following her to the principal's office.
what i heard after that was surprising, i couldn't close my mouth because of how much shock had gone through my body.
what he said gave me goosebumps,
you will be out of this school by tomorrow he shouted"
what really stuck out to me the most is that she looked totally unfased by what he had just said.
to this day i don't know the reason was for this to happen to that poor girl but what i wanted her to know was, she had a whole class supporting her back.
she's okay now, i asked her how she was doing 2 days ago and she told me that she's way happier at her new school. i am excited for her but what i didn't realise until now is that her absence has brought the class to a depressive state. She used to make us all laugh and lifted our spirits up. i miss her.
you could say that i didn't really help her with anything but giving her the satisfaction of knowing that she is surrounded by people who care about her is all that matters
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Hi can you minimize the paragraph because it’s to long for my grade (5 ) thank you for helping me .
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the time i decided to help
one day my friend was called out of class by the principal. Everyone was surprised but her, she acted like this wasn't surprised by the incident,it's like she already knew what the caused this to happen.
As the whole class watched her get out i sneekingly stepped out following her to the principal's office.
what i heard after that was surprising, i couldn't close my mouth because of how much shock had gone through my body.
what he said gave me goosebumps,
you will be out of this school by tomorrow he shouted"
what really stuck out to me the most is that she looked totally unfased by what he had just said.
to this day i don't know the reason was for this to happen to that poor girl but what i wanted her to know was, she had a whole class supporting her back.
she's okay now, i asked her how she was doing 2 days ago and she told me that she's way happier at her new school. i am excited for her but what i didn't realise until now is that her absence has brought the class to a depressive state. She used to make us all laugh and lifted our spirits up. i miss her.
you could say that i didn't really help her with anything but giving her the satisfaction of knowing that she is surrounded by people who care about her is all that matters