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J'avais trois exercices à faire, il ne me reste plus que celui là :
Étoffez le récit ci-dessous pour le rendre plus cohérent et plus captivant :
"The departure of a stagecoach was the beginning of an adventure. At four thirty in the morning it was quite cold. A few people stood in the square, wavedgoodbye to the passengers. The passengers entered the coach. The six horses started trotting. They had to cross the desert before reaching the next station. They knew it would be a long journey. It was Geronimo's territory."
Je crois qu'il faut ajouter des adjectifs, des renseignements mais je ne sais pas vraiment comment m'y prendre...
Merci d'avance.
J'avais trois exercices à faire, il ne me reste plus que celui là :
Étoffez le récit ci-dessous pour le rendre plus cohérent et plus captivant :
"The departure of a stagecoach was the beginning of an adventure. At four thirty in the morning it was quite cold. A few people stood in the square, wavedgoodbye to the passengers. The passengers entered the coach. The six horses started trotting. They had to cross the desert before reaching the next station. They knew it would be a long journey. It was Geronimo's territory."
Je crois qu'il faut ajouter des adjectifs, des renseignements mais je ne sais pas vraiment comment m'y prendre...
Merci d'avance.
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apres phrase 2 : you could see icing on the bench, the moon was lite and the owl was still awake.
après phrase 3 : "farewells, smiles, cryings, all feelings were there"
ap phrase 4 : it was cold inside. the velvet of the bench was used by the time....
apr phrase 5 : the sound echoed in the nite. loudly.
ap phrase 6 : a desert of stone, very hot in the daylight. it was a race against the sun not the distance. but also a race against the indians. like a "hide and seek"
ap phrase 7 and they were afraid.