J'ai un oral d'anglais sur les "FOOD AND DRINKS" ou il faut presenter un peu ce qu'est la malnutrition et expliquer les maladies que cela peut apporter Si je pouvais avoir quelque conseil sur le fonctionnement de l'oral ( par ou commencer, comment conclure ) Merci
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Pour le corp de ton text, il ne faut pas hésiter a hiérarchiser tes arguments. Et surtout mettre des mots liens à chaques arguments comme: " to star" "however" "in spite of" "but", "therefore"...
Pour la conclusion ( la fin". Fait un petit résumé de ton corp en mettant en avant ce que tu veux faire passer dans ton test
ex: For all these reasons, we musn't eat...
J'espere que cette réponse te convient :)
-une courte intro du sujet
-une développement
-une conclusion.
Voici ce que je te propose comme canevas; tu y rajouteras ce dont tu veux parler.
Intro
These last 30 years, our life style has changed a lot and as a consequence has our diet changed too.
I remember that when my Grand-Ma was living with us, she used to cook daily for the whole family . Now that she died, our habits changed a lot.
I notice it's almost the same in every family in know.
As we miss time to cook, we buy frozen dishes from the supermarket or dishes prapared by the caterer. On evenings, baking a pizza is the quickest solution.
We eat salted food but also drink already made fruitjuices and sodas.
(tu parles de la nourriture, des boissons que tu veux citer)
And we practise less sport than before, just because of the car and the necessity to go fast.
As a result, people put on weight. Obesity causes health disorders like vascularian and coronarian diseases.for instance
Conclusion .
Drink water and take the time to cook your own meals!