je dois faire le journal d'un survivant du titanic aidez moi svp ce n'est pas l'anglais qui me pose probleme c'est que je ne sais pas inventer des histoires
Consignes :
1. Choose a moment : Departure,sinking,rescue 2. Write the events in chronological order 3.Mention the dat
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cassandra27110
Salut, j'espere que ma réponse pourra t'aider, j'ai repris le nom d'un vraie rescaper mais ce nest pas la meme histoire, il n'avais que 5 ans, j'ai chercher les heures exacts pour que l'ordre chronologique suive, jespere d'avoir aider, je suis desoler si il y a quelques fautes:
Monday, April, 15th 1912 0h05
I was a first class passenger, at midnight a man knock at our door they tell us '' take the safety jacket and join the bridge in the calm'' my wife and i are really scared, but we take the safety jacket and we join the bridge. Once arrived in the bridge, we saw people scream, running and now we understand what happened: The unsikable sinking. My wife started to scream and cry, i try to calm her. The officiers scream " Child and Women first ", i tell to my wife '' go to the boat i see you later, i promise'' i kissed her and she dissapear. At 2 am the lasted boat leave the Titanic, i try to find a way for stay alive. At 2:15 am, the boat splits in two, i fall in the cold water, i can't breath, i can't feel my bones, I can't see anything, 15 minutes later all the boats sinking, i try to scream that i'm hear, but i'm so cold, I find a door i try to up above, i waiting like an eternity, and then i saw a light i scream loud as i can, they saw me they coming to me i rises in the boat, they give me a blanket. This night we saw a lot of dead people in the water we didn't save anyone else, The next day, i find my beautiful wife i can"t believe that i'm survive to this.I thank god so much for that
Lillian Asplund
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lolelolelol
je te remercie beaucoup! mais je l'ai déja fais et on me la déja rendu mais merci quand même :p
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Monday, April, 15th 1912 0h05
I was a first class passenger, at midnight a man knock at our door they tell us '' take the safety jacket and join the bridge in the calm'' my wife and i are really scared, but we take the safety jacket and we join the bridge.
Once arrived in the bridge, we saw people scream, running and now we understand what happened: The unsikable sinking. My wife started to scream and cry, i try to calm her.
The officiers scream " Child and Women first ", i tell to my wife '' go to the boat i see you later, i promise'' i kissed her and she dissapear.
At 2 am the lasted boat leave the Titanic, i try to find a way for stay alive.
At 2:15 am, the boat splits in two, i fall in the cold water, i can't breath, i can't feel my bones, I can't see anything, 15 minutes later all the boats sinking, i try to scream that i'm hear, but i'm so cold, I find a door i try to up above, i waiting like an eternity, and then i saw a light i scream loud as i can, they saw me they coming to me i rises in the boat, they give me a blanket. This night we saw a lot of dead people in the water we didn't save anyone else,
The next day, i find my beautiful wife i can"t believe that i'm survive to this.I thank god so much for that
Lillian Asplund