Je dois faire une affiche en Anglais sur un club.... Voilà ce que j'ai fait, pourriez-vous m'aider ( à corriger, à traduire les mots en italiques):
Adventures Club
What you can do:
This club is place to lives adventures, meet news friends and talk about your adventures.
You can try tree climbing, bungee jumping, walking tour, hot air balloon, parachute jumping...
You also be abble to organizes adventures and (sorties).
You have the apportunities to enter competitions if you want, or just do this for fun.
Who for:
This club is open for all child.
Who can help:
A teacher and two assistants are there to help you.
When:
Mondays- 6 pm to 7 pm.
Wednesdays-2 pm to 4 pm.
Saturdays-2 pm to 5 pm.
Where:
On the Stade.
Adventures Club
What you can do:
This club is place to lives adventures, meet news friends and talk about your adventures.
You can try tree climbing, bungee jumping, walking tour, hot air balloon, parachute jumping...
You also be abble to organizes adventures and (sorties).
You have the apportunities to enter competitions if you want, or just do this for fun.
Who for:
This club is open for all child.
Who can help:
A teacher and two assistants are there to help you.
When:
Mondays- 6 pm to 7 pm.
Wednesdays-2 pm to 4 pm.
Saturdays-2 pm to 5 pm.
Where:
On the Stade.
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Bonsoir,
Assez bien dans l'ensemble mais quelques erreurs.
What you can do:
This club is the perfect place to experience adventures, make friends and talk about your adventures with others.
You can try tree-climbing, bungee jumping, hiking, hot air ballooning, parachute jumping...
You can also be asked to organize adventures and outings.
You also have the means to participate in competitions if you wish, or simply for fun.
Who for:
This club is open to all children.
Who can help:
A teacher and two assistants are there to help you.
When:
Monday - 6 pm to 7 pm.
Wednesdays, 2:00 to 4:00.
Saturday - 2 pm to 5 pm.
Where:
On a Stadium.