Bonjour, j'aurais besoin d'une simple modification dans le texte que j'ai fais en anglais :
My favorite actors is definitely Leonardo Dicaprio. He was born in 11 november 1974. He stayed his career when he was very young, in 1991 at cinema in "Citters 3", he was only 25. But before that, played in a few series. In 1995, it's performance in Romeo and Juliette confirms his talent. Two years later, he gets to absolute glory as a romantic hero in Titanic, the film by Jones Caneron. He had already played in more than 21 films. I love him, he is most beautiful and the most talented. A actor was born!
Dans ce texte, à la fin, j'ai mis une phrase au pluperfect. Aidez-moi s'il vous plait pour savoir si c'est juste et si le reste du texte n'a pas de fautes!
PS : Ne répondez pas juste "oui c'est juste" ou dans le genre, j'attend une vrai réponse et qu'on me corrige la/les fautes qu'il y a. (Il y en a au moins une)
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Tiffanie24
Tu es sûre qu'il avait seulement 25 ans quand il a fait le film " Critters 3 " en 1991 ?
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celiatournadre
C'est pas très grave l'histoire c'est surout l'orthographe qui compte
emdem
Voici le texte rectifié. D'après moi, ta phrase "he had already..." doit être Mise au Present perfect vu le contexte : Le plu perfect/Le past perfect s’emploie pour parler d’un événement qui s’est déroulé avant un autre événement passé (en français le plus que parfait)
My favorite actor is definitely Leonardo Dicaprio. He was born in 11 november 1974. He started his career at the cinema when he was very young, in 1991 in "Citters 3", he was only 25. But before that, he played in a few series. In 1995, its performance in "Romeo and Juliette" confirmed his talent. Two years later, he reached the absolute glory as a romantic hero in Titanic, the film by James Cameron. He has already played in more than 21 films. I love him. To my mind, he is the most beautiful and the most talented. An actor was born!
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emdem
J'ai oublié de corriger : he was born ON ... et non IN
celiatournadre
D'accord, mais mon prof ma dit de faire au moins une phrase au pluperfect
emdem
J'ai trouvé : au début tu mets : He started his career at the cinema when he was very young ... But before that, HE HAD PLAYED in a few series... --> c'est une action antérieure à la précédente ;)
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My favorite actor is definitely Leonardo Dicaprio. He was born in 11 november 1974. He started his career at the cinema when he was very young, in 1991 in "Citters 3", he was only 25. But before that, he played in a few series. In 1995, its performance in "Romeo and Juliette" confirmed his talent. Two years later, he reached the absolute glory as a romantic hero in Titanic, the film by James Cameron. He has already played in more than 21 films. I love him. To my mind, he is the most beautiful and the most talented. An actor was born!
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--> c'est une action antérieure à la précédente ;)