Pourriez-vous corriger/m'indiquer les fautes (et mettre les mots corrigés en gras de préférence) svp ?
S'il n'y en a pas, me le dire, svp !
"During the holidays, I have participated to a maths training with computer (won thanks to a math competition, I never subscribe myself to a maths' training x)). Then, I went to my grand-ma' home in Lorraine and I see my cousins. That was festive ambiance ! Finally, I surfed on the internet, wrote some fantasy textes with people, and of course did my homeworks ;)"
Merci d'avance !
Carabou.
S'il n'y en a pas, me le dire, svp !
"During the holidays, I have participated to a maths training with computer (won thanks to a math competition, I never subscribe myself to a maths' training x)). Then, I went to my grand-ma' home in Lorraine and I see my cousins. That was festive ambiance ! Finally, I surfed on the internet, wrote some fantasy textes with people, and of course did my homeworks ;)"
Merci d'avance !
Carabou.
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Tu dois employer le prétérit car l'action est terminée. De plus "to participate" se construit avec la préposition "in". Autre possibilité : I took part in a maths training.
Je pense aussi que tu devrais écrire "I participated in a computer-based maths training". Autrement, on comprend que tu t'es entraîné avec des ordinateurs, comme si c'était d'autres participants.
2) I have never subscribed to any kind of maths training.
Ici present perfect car l'action dure toujours.
3) Then, I went to my Grandma's home and I visited my cousins.
4) That was a festive ambiance : grammaticallement c'est correct mais ça sonne un peu trop français. Je dirais plutôt : "The atmosphere during those days was cheerful".
5) Finally, I surfed on the Internet, wrote some fantasy texts with people, and of course I did my homeworks