Quelqu’un pourrait t’il me corriger mon texte et ajouter des modo/modales et mettre quelques phrases à la voix passive svp?
"My name is Nora Baker, I'm 20 years old. I would describe myself as kind, intelligent, and intimidating. In case you need it, I live in the former New York since our governor was overthrown. There's a new governor who is a dictator because of him. There are four very different neighborhoods: Shadowhaven in the north, Ruinburg in the south, Desolation City in the west, and Ashbourne in the east. I live in the east of the former New York. Our new governor wasn't always a dictator. He was corrupted by other countries to give away all our wealth, so we couldn't keep anything because everything was sold for his money. At first, he was a very kind governor who cared about protecting his citizens. Now, he only protects the citizens of the South because he decided to place all the high-ranking and wealthy people in that neighborhood. The east and west neighborhoods are for those who can fend for themselves, and the north and west neighborhoods are for the most deprived.
And he has forbidden all residents from leaving their respective neighborhoods."
"My name is Nora Baker, I'm 20 years old. I would describe myself as kind, intelligent, and intimidating. In case you need it, I live in the former New York since our governor was overthrown. There's a new governor who is a dictator because of him. There are four very different neighborhoods: Shadowhaven in the north, Ruinburg in the south, Desolation City in the west, and Ashbourne in the east. I live in the east of the former New York. Our new governor wasn't always a dictator. He was corrupted by other countries to give away all our wealth, so we couldn't keep anything because everything was sold for his money. At first, he was a very kind governor who cared about protecting his citizens. Now, he only protects the citizens of the South because he decided to place all the high-ranking and wealthy people in that neighborhood. The east and west neighborhoods are for those who can fend for themselves, and the north and west neighborhoods are for the most deprived.
And he has forbidden all residents from leaving their respective neighborhoods."
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"My name is Nora Baker, I'm 20 years old. I would describe myself as kind, intelligent, and assertive. If needed, it can be said that I live in the former New York since our governor was overthrown. There's a new governor who has become a dictator because of him. There are four neighborhoods that are very different: Shadowhaven in the north, Ruinburg in the south, Desolation City in the west, and Ashbourne in the east. I live in the east of the former New York. Our new governor was not always a dictator. He has been corrupted by other countries to give away all our wealth, so nothing could be kept because everything was sold for his money. Initially, he was a very kind governor who cared about protecting his citizens. Now, the citizens of the South are the only ones he protects, as he has decided to place all high-ranking and wealthy people in that neighborhood. The east and west neighborhoods are left for those who can fend for themselves, and the north and west neighborhoods are for the most deprived.
Furthermore, all residents have been forbidden from leaving their respective neighborhoods.”En espérant que ça t’aide,bonne soirée