plzz aidez moi writing: write a story about something important -where did you find it ? -who were you with ? what was the shap of it? - what did you do with it in the end? j'ai commencé avec:it was a disaster, the day when i went out with my freind to the shopping center , and i decied after that to went to the cineme and watched a horrible film , for me it wasn't a good idea but i accepted just to enjoy my day , when we was at the cinema ,and we bought pop corn and soda . it was crowd , a lot of people ....... ( je me suis bloquer là aidez moi et corrigez moi les fautes d'orthographe et mrc d'avance)
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Inkcherry
It was a disaster , the day that I went out the to mall ( Shopping center) with my friend, After that I decided we went the movies (cinema) , my friend suggested that we go watch a horror film, to me it wasn't a good idea but I accepted, just to enjoy my day. When we were at the movies (cinema) , we bought some Popcorn and sodas. It was crowded but I still was able to find a seat . I sat down and drank my soda. The can fit exactly in the can holder because it was round. After the scary movie. I had finished my soda and threw the empty can away. I really enjoyed my day , even though horror films are not really my type of movies . :)
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chouchouyou290
mais je doit parler de quelque chose que j'ai trouvé et montrer à ma copine quand on était au cinéma
Inkcherry
bah c'est bon si non que j'ai mis que tu avait acheter la "chose qui est le soda
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