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I watched TV and I went to the ice rink, but not of Christmas. I also played on the lap top computeur. All day long, I listened to some music on my MP3. I also played with my brother the game FIFA the playstation. I was cool !
During my holidays, I played to Playstation 3 and I watched television. I went to the rink, but I did not celebrate Christmas. I had a laptop and mp3 so I played a lot of at Fifa on Playstation 3 with my brother.