Pouvez vous corrigez certaine phrases? Ou formulations de phrases vue que c'est un texte à lire à l'orale merci:
Hey Angela, I know what you mean but you only have sixteen, you are a young women and you have a time for say «nobody wants to marry me» it’s not true. You say «I’m nobody, I’m loser» but why? What is you’re goal? To look like this women who are retouched that we can see on the advertising, on the campaigns, on the social media or in the bill board? Do you know that? Than every women are airbrushed on every pictures.
For example, you say “my face is acne and my hair is so boring” but you know all face of the models are smoothed they are, no wrinkles and no pores. And the hair are really highlighted with many product so the reality is distorted.
Now, I want you remind you than you are a strong women and I want you look at yourself in the mirror and say “I’m not just plump or fat, or ugly or not ugly, I’m someone.”
And if I can give you my advice, stop focusing on your body and be aware of the beauty you already get. And the more you stay focus in your body the more you find many flaws.. And the less you care it the more you feel better. I can also advise you to listen the speech of Ashley Graham’s for body positivty who can change your perception of thought.
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DrErika
Hey Angela, I know what you mean buy you're only sixteen, you are a young woman. Don't say that you "nobody is ever going to marry me", when you still have time to find the perfect person. You say "I'm a nobody and a loser" but why? What is your goal? To look like photoshopped woman that we can see everywhere on the T.V., billboard ad, magazines and social medias?
For exemple you say: "I have acne and my hair is so boring" but you know that all the faces of the models are smoothed so we can't see theirs wrinkles and pores? The hair are highlighted with many products. The reality is DISTORTED.
Now, I want you to know that you are a strong women and I want you to look at yourself in the mirror and say “I’m not a plump, fat, or ugly person, I’m someone.”
And if I can give you my advice, stop focusing on your body and be aware of the beauty you already have. And the more you stay focused in your body the more you find many flaws.. And the less you care the more you feel better. I can also advise you to listen the speech of Ashley Graham’s for body positivty who can change your perception of thought.
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For exemple you say: "I have acne and my hair is so boring" but you know that all the faces of the models are smoothed so we can't see theirs wrinkles and pores? The hair are highlighted with many products. The reality is DISTORTED.
Now, I want you to know that you are a strong women and I want you to look at yourself in the mirror and say “I’m not a plump, fat, or ugly person, I’m someone.”
And if I can give you my advice, stop focusing on your body and be aware of the beauty you already have. And the more you stay focused in your body the more you find many flaws.. And the less you care the more you feel better.
I can also advise you to listen the speech of Ashley Graham’s for body positivty who can change your perception of thought.