Salut a tous je dois décrire mon idéal ville je l'ai fais mais je voudrais des corrections Merci pour ceux qui le feront
ANGLAIS
My ideal city
First of all I would like wings to fly, to move without polluting. For that my city will always be provided with good weather and all will be located near the sea, so people can still swim.
Then in my city the presence of a revolutionary technology will facilitate the lives of people in all areas, in addition there will be no homeless and the word famine will not exist.
However for people to be happy they will not have sick and will always be in good shape for this I will build a great and wonderful stadium to play football and will there be many other activities.
And finally I would be proud of my city because it will be perfect
Ce que j'ai voulu dire
Mon idéal ville
Tout d'abord je voudrais des ailes pour voler, pour se deplacer sans polluer. Pour cela ma ville sera toujours muni d'un beau temps et sera situe tous près de la mer ,donc les gens pourront toujours nager .
Puis dans ma ville la présence d'une technologie revolutionnaire facilitera la vie des gens dans tous les domaines, de plus il n'y aura pas des sans-abris et le mot famine n'existera pas.
Cependant pour que les gens soit heureux ils n'auront pas de maladie et seront toujours en bonne forme pour cela je construirai un grand et magnifique stade pour jouer au foot et il y'aura de nombreuses autres activites.
Et enfin je serais fier de ma ville car elle sera parfaite
First of all I would like to have wings to fly, to move without polluting. So that my city will always be provided with good weather. Everyone will be located near the sea, so that people can still swim.
Then in my city the presence of a revolutionary technology will make the lives of people in all areas easier, and there will be no homeless and the word famine will not exist.
However for people to be happy they will not be sick and will always be in good shape. For this, I will build a great and wonderful stadium to play football and there will be many other activities.
And finally I would be proud of my city because it will be perfect
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First of all I would like to have wings to fly, to move without polluting. So that my city will always be provided with good weather. Everyone will be located near the sea, so that people can still swim.
Then in my city the presence of a revolutionary technology will make the lives of people in all areas easier, and there will be no homeless and the word famine will not exist.
However for people to be happy they will not be sick and will always be in good shape. For this, I will build a great and wonderful stadium to play football and there will be many other activities.
And finally I would be proud of my city because it will be perfect