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Oprah Winfrey was born on January 29th, 1954 in Mississippi. She had a hard-childhood because she was sexually abused and she became pregnant at 14 but her son died. Oprah Winfrey moved to Nashville to live with her father then she entered Tennessee State University and she began working hard in radio and television despite of her failure. Friendly and sociable, she horses talk shows and has interviewed celebrities. She has also many companies like OWN Network, a magazine, the O Book Club, Harpo production company. She won an award for her role as supporting actress in the movie “The color purple”. In politics, she pushes for a law to create a data base for chill abuser. Now she is an icon and the leader for many Afro-Americans and women. She is also the richest woman in America and has a lot of influence.
Oprah Winfrey was born on January 29th, 1954 in Mississippi. She had a hard-childhood because she was sexually abused, and(ajoute la virgule) she became pregnant at 14 but her son died.
Oprah Winfrey moved to Nashville to live with her father then she entered Tennessee State University, and (ajoute la virgule) she began working hard in radio and television despite (enlève le "of") her failure. Friendly and sociable, she horses talk shows and has interviewed celebrities. She has also many companies like OWN Network, a magazine, the O Book Club, Harpo production company. She won an award for her role as supporting actress in the film (au lieu de movie) “The color purple”. In politics, she pushes for a law to create a data base for chill abuser.
Now she is an icon and the leader for many Afro-Americans and women. She is also the richest woman in America and has a lot of influence.
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Hey, voici ton devoir :
Oprah Winfrey was born on January 29th, 1954 in Mississippi. She had a hard-childhood because she was sexually abused, and (ajoute la virgule) she became pregnant at 14 but her son died.
Oprah Winfrey moved to Nashville to live with her father then she entered Tennessee State University, and (ajoute la virgule) she began working hard in radio and television despite (enlève le "of") her failure. Friendly and sociable, she horses talk shows and has interviewed celebrities. She has also many companies like OWN Network, a magazine, the O Book Club, Harpo production company. She won an award for her role as supporting actress in the film (au lieu de movie) “The color purple”. In politics, she pushes for a law to create a data base for chill abuser.
Now she is an icon and the leader for many Afro-Americans and women. She is also the richest woman in America and has a lot of influence.
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