Salut :) (niveau 3ème)
J'ai une lettre de présentation a envoyer à un correspondant anglais et je voulais savoir si je n'avais pas fais de fautes. Merci de bien vouloir me corriger en cas d'erreur ou de formulation :)
Hi !
I'm your new penpal so I have to present me.
My name is Amandine, I am forteen years old and fifteen on January 31th. I've green eyes, brown and long hair, I think that i'm medium cause 1.65 is not really tall or small. And you ? How are you physically ? My parents are divorced and I have a 23-year-old brother and two half 31 and 34-year-old brothers. I was born in Lagny, however I live at present in Champs-sur marne, it's a city not far from paris. I live with my mother the week and with my father a weekend on two. Where do you live ? Do you have any brothers or sisters ?
I love listening to music and singing. All of my friends tell me that I should stop spending all of my time singing, but I can't. I'm fond of potatoes and chicken !! I'm rather a good pupil and I have good marks, but I chat a little too much, just a little !
So, i think that i've said the most important things about me. Can you made the same thing?
Tell me what you like to do, how you are etc...?
Good bye dear Correspondant !
J'ai une lettre de présentation a envoyer à un correspondant anglais et je voulais savoir si je n'avais pas fais de fautes. Merci de bien vouloir me corriger en cas d'erreur ou de formulation :)
Hi !
I'm your new penpal so I have to present me.
My name is Amandine, I am forteen years old and fifteen on January 31th. I've green eyes, brown and long hair, I think that i'm medium cause 1.65 is not really tall or small. And you ? How are you physically ? My parents are divorced and I have a 23-year-old brother and two half 31 and 34-year-old brothers. I was born in Lagny, however I live at present in Champs-sur marne, it's a city not far from paris. I live with my mother the week and with my father a weekend on two. Where do you live ? Do you have any brothers or sisters ?
I love listening to music and singing. All of my friends tell me that I should stop spending all of my time singing, but I can't. I'm fond of potatoes and chicken !! I'm rather a good pupil and I have good marks, but I chat a little too much, just a little !
So, i think that i've said the most important things about me. Can you made the same thing?
Tell me what you like to do, how you are etc...?
Good bye dear Correspondant !
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C'est pas mal du tout, peu de fautes :)Hi !
I'm your new penpal so I have to introduce myself ==> se présenter = to introduce myself.
My name is Amandine, I am fourteen years old (ou 14 years old) and I will be fifteen on January 31th. I've green eyes, brown and long hair. I think that i'm medium cause 1.65 is not really tall or small. And you ? How are you physically ? My parents are divorced and I have a 23-year old brother and two step brothers who are 31 and 34 years old. (Attention, demi-frère = step brother)
I was born in Lagny, however I currently live in Champs-sur marne, a city not far away from paris. I live with my mother the week and with my father every other week end (un week end sur 2 = every other week end). Where do you live ? Do you have any brother or sister? (pas de "s" après any)
I love listening to music and singing. All of my friends tell me that I should stop spending all of my time singing, but I can't. I'm fond of potatoes and chicken !! I'm rather a good pupil and I have good marks, but I chat a little too much, just a little !
So, i think that i've said the most important things about me. Can you made the same thing?
Tell me what you like to do, what you look like etc...?
pour dire "comment tu es" à propos de l'apparence physique, il faut utiliser la forme to look like : what do you look like?... How are you veut dire "comment tu vas")