Salut tout le monde ! C pour demain... j'aurais besoin d'aide pour corrigé mon texte d'anglais svp :
This audio document speaks about the life of Morristown in New Jersey. It is not town my important. She(it) served as military base during the war for independence in America. The winter of 1780 was very cold thus very hard. Marqui de Lafayette came to the USA in 1780 to help the Americans. During the war for independence, the American colonies(summer camps) fought against Great Britain for their independence; the French people helped them thus making allied of them but enemies of the English people who thus took revenge.
Merci a ceux qui prendront le temps :) et bonne soirée !
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LexyVcnt (moi je dirais "this document is a recording which is about the life of Morristown..." car un document ne parle pas) This audio document speaks about the life of Morristown in New Jersey. It is not town ("my important" içi je n'ai pas compris le sens de ta phrase et du "my"). it were ( it+ preterit, it= car ce n'est pas une personne) served as military base during the war for independence in America. The winter of 1780 were(were =car ce n'est pas une personne) very cold thus very hard. Marqui de Lafayette came to the USA in 1780 to help the Americans. During the war for independence, the American colonies(summer camps) fought against Great Britain for their independence; the French people helped them thus making allied of them but enemies of the English people who thus took revenge.
Armell
aux niveu ou tu a dit ("the winter 1780 were cold") j croi ke se mieux d dit (" the winter season was very cold ") puiske il ya jste 1e season d nege
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(moi je dirais "this document is a recording which is about the life of Morristown..." car un document ne parle pas) This audio document speaks about the life of Morristown in New Jersey. It is not town ("my important" içi je n'ai pas compris le sens de ta phrase et du "my"). it were ( it+ preterit, it= car ce n'est pas une personne) served as military base during the war for independence in America. The winter of 1780 were(were =car ce n'est pas une personne) very cold thus very hard. Marqui de Lafayette came to the USA in 1780 to help the Americans. During the war for independence, the American colonies(summer camps) fought against Great Britain for their independence; the French people helped them thus making allied of them but enemies of the English people who thus took revenge.