May 2019 1 170 Report
Salut, bon samedi pour commencer !
Pouvez-vous m'aidez à corriger mes fautes en anglais en me proposant des corretions/suggestions?
Voici le texte :
Hello, my first name is Chris, my second name Nowdy. I love music, I learnt song at four years old! I am very proud to be a teenager celebrity. For that, I had hard-working.
Chris Nowdy
I was born the 21th of the February two thousand. I am sixteen years old and I am only child. I am 1m75 tall. I am England and I live also there. My parents are John Nowdy and Julie Nowdy. Thanks to them because without my parents I can’t be a celebrity. They support me a lot.
The main event to become a star
In my school, had always twenty on twenty in music. My teacher advises me to became a singer. I was shocked and I was euphoria!
When I had twelve years old. I participate at a TV Singing Show. I won the first price. After that, I became a sing-songwriter.
Now, I want to be the next Justin Beber.

Merci, cordialement du fond du coeur !

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