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My invention is the shoes with interchangeable heels. It's amazing because thanks to it women can change their heels on the same shoes. I will be speaking about the following subjects. firstly, how it works, then the advantages and inconvenients . To finish I'll give you my personal opinion.These shoes are useful to women who can thus insert the heels of their choice. They can also put a heel on the front of the shoes to create their own style.
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My invention is shoes with interchangeable heels. It's amazing because thanks to it, women can change their heels on the same type of shoes. I will be speaking about the following subjects. Firstly, how it works, and then the advantages and inconvenients . As a conclusion, I'll give you my personal opinion. These shoes are useful to women who can thus insert the heels of their choice. They can also put a heel on the front of the shoes to create their own style.
J'ai modifié quelques détails, mais dans l'ensemble c'est bien.
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I will be speaking about the following subjects. Firstly, how it works, and then the advantages and inconvenients . As a conclusion, I'll give you my personal opinion. These shoes are useful to women who can thus insert the heels of their choice. They can also put a heel on the front of the shoes to create their own style.
J'ai modifié quelques détails, mais dans l'ensemble c'est bien.