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The challenge of this expedition
1/ The difficulties of the challenge :
The difficulties of the challenge is a temperature of this environment. They are exposed at of very insufise temperature (-90). Moreover, they are make this challenge in a almost permed obscurity.
2/ The cause that Sir Fiennes defends :
The cause that Sir Fiennes defends is the necesity of defender the challenge of travel in evironment very Cold. So, the challenge allows offer 10 millions of dollars for association "Seeing os Believing".
3/ The reason why he chose to defend that cause :
The reason why he chose the defend that cause are : of defender this cause because in world, a person in world become blinded lose and perding capacity visuel. Moreover, he defend also this cause because many peole are vision that a blinded do not continued her scolarity, her work, her life. However, the life not stop, and can continues her life like before.
4/ With the help of your notes, explain Sir Fiennes's entire project :
Fiennes's project is have 10 millions of dollars pour "seeing is believing", a international initiative against the stereotypes of persons blinded. Also, he have travelling in the environments very cold, crossing the Antartic.
5/ Would you be willing to donate money to such a charity? Why or why not?
I be willing to donate my money to such a charity because it would allow of combating against the stereotypes, of contribuing for this charity, help this cause and persons building have of Believing at best life.
The challenge of this expedition
1/ The difficulties of the challenge :
The difficulties of the challenge is a temperature of this environment. They are exposed at of very insufise temperature (-90). Moreover, they are make this challenge in a almost permed obscurity.
2/ The cause that Sir Fiennes defends :
The cause that Sir Fiennes defends is the necesity of defender the challenge of travel in evironment very Cold. So, the challenge allows offer 10 millions of dollars for association "Seeing os Believing".
3/ The reason why he chose to defend that cause :
The reason why he chose the defend that cause are : of defender this cause because in world, a person in world become blinded lose and perding capacity visuel. Moreover, he defend also this cause because many peole are vision that a blinded do not continued her scolarity, her work, her life. However, the life not stop, and can continues her life like before.
4/ With the help of your notes, explain Sir Fiennes's entire project :
Fiennes's project is have 10 millions of dollars pour "seeing is believing", a international initiative against the stereotypes of persons blinded. Also, he have travelling in the environments very cold, crossing the Antartic.
5/ Would you be willing to donate money to such a charity? Why or why not?
I be willing to donate my money to such a charity because it would allow of combating against the stereotypes, of contribuing for this charity, help this cause and persons building have of Believing at best life.
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The challenge of this expedition
1 / The difficulties of the challenge:
The difficulty of the challenge is a temperature of this environment. They are exposed to very insufficient temperatures (-90). In addition, they take up this challenge in almost permanent obscurity.
2 / The cause defended by Sir Fiennes:
The cause that Sir Fiennes defends is the need to defend the challenge of traveling in a very cold environment. Thus, the challenge makes it possible to offer 10 million dollars for the association "Seeing os Believing".
3 / The reason why he chose to defend this cause:
The reason why he chose to defend this cause are: to defend this cause because in the world, a person in the world becomes blind loses and loses his visual capacity. In addition, he also defends this cause because many people have the vision that a blind man does not continue his schooling, his work, his life. However, life does not stop, and can continue life as before.
4 / Using your notes, explain the whole project of Sir Fiennes:
Fiennes' project is to have 10 million dollars to "see is to believe", an international initiative against the stereotypes of the blind. In addition, he traveled in very cold environments, crossing Antarctica.
5 / Would you be willing to donate money to such a charity? Why or why not?
I am ready to donate my money to such an association because it would help to fight against stereotypes, to contribute to this association, to help this cause and people who are building to believe in a better life.
1)One of the challenge’s difficulties is..
They make ( ils font)ou they are making ( ils sont en train de faire)
2) necessity to defend the challenge of travel in an environnement very cold
3) to defend that cause
He also defends it ( ça evite la répétion) because many people think
The life does not stop
4) fiennes’s project is TO have.. FOR.... AN international
Also, he HAS TRAVELED in Very cold environnement
5) I’D/ i would be
Je n’ai pas compris ce que tu voulais dire pas it would allow of ..