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Bonjour a tous,

Mon prof d'anglais nous a demandé de corriger un texte qu'on avait fait mais j'ai du mal à corriger mes erreurs (j'y arrive sur des textes que je n'ai pas écrit, et pas les miens, c'est bizarre je sais!). Pardon d'avance pour les fautes ! Voici le texte:
I would like to go in this school because it has an outstanding record of achievement and an excellent level. Plus, there are the arts in the different subjects and I love drawing. This school welcome many foreign students all over the world and it's in New York near a big park, Battery Park. Then, I hope that there is a very big library 'cause reading is my favori activity. I think there is a lot of good informatics equipments in this school. Finally, there are many activities in this High School or in NY.

Merci !!!