bonjour j'ai besoins d'aide vous pouvez m'aider s'il vous plait. voici la consigne : Tu vas devoir rédiger un discours et dire en classe afin de défendre la cause de ton choix. Cette cause peut être l'une de celles que nous avons étudié en classe (ségrégation, esclavage noirs américains) ou elle peut être une cause mondiale (racisme, écologie, guerres, égalité homme- femme...) ou enfin tout simplement une cause de ta vie quotidienne (collège, maison, vie de tous les jours...) Barème : Rédiger environ 10/15 lignes Utilisation du passif /5 Vocabulaire varié de l'indignation /4 Cohérence et pertinence de la cause /3 Eye contact /2 Eloquence et ton utilisé /3 Qualité de l'anglais /3
est ce que vous pouvez m'aider a rediger ce discour s'il vous plait ⚠️mais il ne faut surtout pas oublier que tout doit etre au passif ⚠️
Today, I would like to talk to you about a subject that is very important to me, and that is environmental protection. Our planet is in danger, and it is up to all of us to do our part to save it.
Every day, we hear about things like air pollution, deforestation, and climate change. These are serious problems that affect all of us, and they are getting worse every day. We must act now to make a difference.
There are many things we can do to help protect our environment. We can recycle, conserve water and energy, plant trees, and reduce our use of plastics. These small actions can make a big difference if we all work together.
But we need to do more than just make small changes in our own lives. We need to speak out and demand change from our leaders and businesses. We need to hold them accountable for their actions and demand that they take action to protect our planet.
So, let us all work together to make a positive impact on our environment. Let us reduce our carbon footprint, protect our forests and oceans, and create a sustainable future for ourselves and future generations.
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Bonjour,
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I would like to talk to you about a subject that is very important to me, and that is environmental protection. Our planet is in danger, and it is up to all of us to do our part to save it.
Every day, we hear about things like air pollution, deforestation, and climate change. These are serious problems that affect all of us, and they are getting worse every day. We must act now to make a difference.
There are many things we can do to help protect our environment. We can recycle, conserve water and energy, plant trees, and reduce our use of plastics. These small actions can make a big difference if we all work together.
But we need to do more than just make small changes in our own lives. We need to speak out and demand change from our leaders and businesses. We need to hold them accountable for their actions and demand that they take action to protect our planet.
So, let us all work together to make a positive impact on our environment. Let us reduce our carbon footprint, protect our forests and oceans, and create a sustainable future for ourselves and future generations.
Thank you for listening.