Faut écrire en anglais a son journal intime faut se mettre dans la peau d'un indien ou d'un chercheur d'or (comment ils vivait avant) exemple en français : cher journal, aujourd'hui jallait me faire tuer par un cowboy..(...)
Dear diary , i am writing on your pages all the hard time that i have been through for 15 years to start of my name is Divyanshu fom india ,now i am 31 years old , but back then in my really hard time in india i was 16 and i was forced to get married it was an arranged marriage , my parent married me with a girl named Drishdi who was only 14 years old at that time (but now she is 29) at first everything was alright until she got pregnent at 15 years old and a midium old lady told us that it was twin so i understood that i have to work hard to make my family survive and to be able to provide special cares to my future children and give them best education at school and make them studying outside the country because i want them to achieve there dreams and not be just like there father and mother .
After talking to my wife that i wanted to go to search for gold to make them survive , she agreed and prepared my lunch box , there were not much food because we were really poor so she did her bast and made me white rice with vegetable and a big jar of water, i had to walk 2 days to arrive in the place that everyone say that there are a lots of gols coming out of the ground.
i started to break the rocks and the stones but i did not find anything until the next 4 days , i found a little of golds so i packed my equipment and went to the capital of india and sold the little peace of gold . it was not much money but at least i could have bough for my wife enough food for a hole week .
i have been trying and trying to look for golds but i did not find anything so i started to pray to god to help me out with finding gold that i can help my children's future with it . 15 years after my twin bith (this midium wa rigth and telling the truth ) they went to school in india and graduated from college.
one day i decided to digg under the ground after long hours of digging i saw a little spot of shine so i kept digging and digging and then ... guess what A BIG MASSIVE PEACE OF GOLD i was so happy , i broked the big massive peace of gold in little peaces and put then in a lot of bags i went home and showed them to my childrend and wife i took one bag and sold it in a gold shop ,the bag worthed 10 000 dollars , so took my family and went to the USA where my children gratuated from university one became a doctor and the other one an advocat .
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Dear diary , i am writing on your pages all the hard time that i have been through for 15 years to start of my name is Divyanshu fom india ,now i am 31 years old , but back then in my really hard time in india i was 16 and i was forced to get married it was an arranged marriage , my parent married me with a girl named Drishdi who was only 14 years old at that time (but now she is 29) at first everything was alright until she got pregnent at 15 years old and a midium old lady told us that it was twin so i understood that i have to work hard to make my family survive and to be able to provide special cares to my future children and give them best education at school and make them studying outside the country because i want them to achieve there dreams and not be just like there father and mother .
After talking to my wife that i wanted to go to search for gold to make them survive , she agreed and prepared my lunch box , there were not much food because we were really poor so she did her bast and made me white rice with vegetable and a big jar of water, i had to walk 2 days to arrive in the place that everyone say that there are a lots of gols coming out of the ground.
i started to break the rocks and the stones but i did not find anything until the next 4 days , i found a little of golds so i packed my equipment and went to the capital of india and sold the little peace of gold . it was not much money but at least i could have bough for my wife enough food for a hole week .
i have been trying and trying to look for golds but i did not find anything so i started to pray to god to help me out with finding gold that i can help my children's future with it . 15 years after my twin bith (this midium wa rigth and telling the truth ) they went to school in india and graduated from college.
one day i decided to digg under the ground after long hours of digging i saw a little spot of shine so i kept digging and digging and then ... guess what A BIG MASSIVE PEACE OF GOLD i was so happy , i broked the big massive peace of gold in little peaces and put then in a lot of bags i went home and showed them to my childrend and wife i took one bag and sold it in a gold shop ,the bag worthed 10 000 dollars , so took my family and went to the USA where my children gratuated from university one became a doctor and the other one an advocat .