Bjr Svp aidez moi a faire une suite à ce texte tandis que la consigne c’est inventer une histoire d’une personne qui est forcé de rester chez elle puis elle est forcé de sortir de chez elle: hey ho! she cried, locked up for a few days in her house. Nothing was like before: everything was in shambles, the house was catastrophic. One day, a postman came home to drop off a package, the one was shocked! The books on the floor, the dirty laundry, the dirt! He called the police, that's where she was forced to see the world for years. la trad en fr > hé ho ! criait-elle, enfermée de puis quelques jours dans sa maison. Rien n'était comme avant tout était en bazar, la maison était catastrophique. Un jour, un facteur rentra chez elle pour lui déposer un colis, celui si était choqué ! Les livres par terre, le linge sale, la saleté ! Il appella la police, c'est là qu'elle fut obligée de voir le monde depuis des années. Merci bcp
hey ho! she cried, locked up for a few days in her house. Nothing was like before: everything was in shambles, the house was catastrophic. One day, a postman came home to drop off a package, the one was shocked! The books on the floor, the dirty laundry, the dirt! He called the police, that's where she was forced to see the world for years.
le mien
after all these years saw people again, the natural light but above all the heat of the sun against his skin. since being forced to stay locked up in her home, her skin had turned white almost transparent. she had to get out her skin was asking for the sun but she really wasn't ready for it, unfortunately it was not a choice but an obligation for her physical and especially mental health to have been locked up for a very long time
j'espère que ça te va et que ça te plaît
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inessoudsad
Merci mais pourriez-vous m’aidez à faire une suite de mon texte svp
pierrotrollin
si tu me donne quelque idées pour finir et je te l’écrit et traduit
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hey ho! she cried, locked up for a few days in her house. Nothing was like before: everything was in shambles, the house was catastrophic. One day, a postman came home to drop off a package, the one was shocked! The books on the floor, the dirty laundry, the dirt! He called the police, that's where she was forced to see the world for years.
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after all these years saw people again, the natural light but above all the heat of the sun against his skin. since being forced to stay locked up in her home, her skin had turned white almost transparent. she had to get out her skin was asking for the sun but she really wasn't ready for it, unfortunately it was not a choice but an obligation for her physical and especially mental health to have been locked up for a very long time
j'espère que ça te va et que ça te plaît