(je suis pas prof non plus mais quelques trucs...)
Hi Ericka
I'm in Los Angeles with my family and it's amazing (= génial / wonderful = merveilleux... ça va aussi)! We (tu es avec ta famille c'est pour ça que j'ai mis "we") have been visiting the Universal Studios and the museum of Madame Tussaud as well. (nous avons visité..pour changer un peu de temps = present perfect continuous) Yesterday I (we ?) have been to Santa Monica by the Pacific Ocean ( by = au bord, mais tu peux mettre aussi "along"). I enjoyed the attractions over there a lot and the "trees" ???? tu veux dire les palmiers : the palm trees ??? (y a pas vraiment d'arbres là-bas ??) The weather was nice and very hot. (trop de I like). We did so many things : I did shopping, I swam into the Ocean, I rode a bike at Venice beach not far away from Santa Monica.... We were so happy to be in Los Angeles, it was so great, we had wonderful holidays anyway....
Alors je suis pas professeur d'anglais donc ma réponse est à prendre avec des pincettes !
I am in Los Angeles with my family and it's wondeful ! I visited Universal Studios and (Ne pas remettre le verbe pour la fluidité !) the ( a ? Il y a plusieurs musée de cette madame ?) museum of madame Tussads.
Yesterday, I went ( Go to a place !) TO Santa Monica at the side of the Pacific ocean. (--> Je suis pas sûr de la construction de cette phrase avec "at the side")
I liked the attractions over there ( là-bas ) and the trees.
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(je suis pas prof non plus mais quelques trucs...)
Hi Ericka
I'm in Los Angeles with my family and it's amazing (= génial / wonderful = merveilleux... ça va aussi)! We (tu es avec ta famille c'est pour ça que j'ai mis "we") have been visiting the Universal Studios and the museum of Madame Tussaud as well. (nous avons visité..pour changer un peu de temps = present perfect continuous)
Yesterday I (we ?) have been to Santa Monica by the Pacific Ocean ( by = au bord, mais tu peux mettre aussi "along"). I enjoyed the attractions over there a lot and the "trees" ???? tu veux dire les palmiers : the palm trees ??? (y a pas vraiment d'arbres là-bas ??)
The weather was nice and very hot. (trop de I like).
We did so many things : I did shopping, I swam into the Ocean, I rode a bike at Venice beach not far away from Santa Monica....
We were so happy to be in Los Angeles, it was so great, we had wonderful holidays anyway....
See you soon
Aida
j'espère que ça t'ira !
bonne journée !
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Alors je suis pas professeur d'anglais donc ma réponse est à prendre avec des pincettes !I am in Los Angeles with my family and it's wondeful ! I visited Universal Studios and (Ne pas remettre le verbe pour la fluidité !) the ( a ? Il y a plusieurs musée de cette madame ?) museum of madame Tussads.
Yesterday, I went ( Go to a place !) TO Santa Monica at the side of the Pacific ocean.
(--> Je suis pas sûr de la construction de cette phrase avec "at the side")
I liked the attractions over there ( là-bas ) and the trees.
I rode a bike !
We were happy to be in Los Angeles everywhere !