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"I'm Jason Burtton, but my nickname is J.B. Everybody calls me like that. I'm 21 years old, i'm a men and i'm single because i move often so i didn't have the time to begining a relationship.
To this travel, i'm with my best friend : Mike Fini. He's 21 years old too and he's single for the same reason as me.
This is the twenty second day, we are on the road ; it's harder and harder. We left Roleigh un North Carolina the first March 1876. We move west tout Bismarck un North Dakota. There approxymately 2 000 miles.
I remmember the first day, we were stressed and sorrowful. The weather is mild enough, we had occasional showers and a few thunderstorms.
We had to leave because the gold diggers attacked us by the sea.
Today, it happened somethings important ; we meet Indians in Topeka in Kansas. The meeting went wrong because they thought we attacked them. They tied us a totem. There was fire next to us. It was more and more dangerous. We thought we were going killed by the Indians. But the chief of the tribe came to talk to us and it all came together. When we left, they offered their food and water, as well as covers of Buffalo skin.
"I'm Jason Burtton, but my nickname is J.B. Everybody calls me like that. I'm 21 years old, i'm a men and i'm single because i move often so i didn't have the time to begining a relationship.
To this travel, i'm with my best friend : Mike Fini. He's 21 years old too and he's single for the same reason as me.
This is the twenty second day, we are on the road ; it's harder and harder. We left Roleigh un North Carolina the first March 1876. We move west tout Bismarck un North Dakota. There approxymately 2 000 miles.
I remmember the first day, we were stressed and sorrowful. The weather is mild enough, we had occasional showers and a few thunderstorms.
We had to leave because the gold diggers attacked us by the sea.
Today, it happened somethings important ; we meet Indians in Topeka in Kansas. The meeting went wrong because they thought we attacked them. They tied us a totem. There was fire next to us. It was more and more dangerous. We thought we were going killed by the Indians. But the chief of the tribe came to talk to us and it all came together. When we left, they offered their food and water, as well as covers of Buffalo skin.
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""I'm Jason Burtton, but my nickname is J.B. Everybody calls me like that. I'm 21 years old, i'm a man and i'm single because i often move so i didn't have the time to begin a relationship.
I'm travelling with my best friend : Mike Fini. He's 21 years old too and he's single for the same reason as me.
This is the twenty second day, we are on the road ; it's getting harder and harder. We left Roleigh in North Carolina the first March in 1876. We move west to Bismarck in North Dakota. There are approximately 2 000 miles.
I remember the first day, we were stressed and sorrowful. The weather was mild enough, we had occasional showers and a few thunderstorms.
We had to leave because the gold diggers attacked us by the sea.
Today, something important happened; we met the Indians in Topeka in Kansas. The meeting went wrong because they thought we were attacking them. They tied us to a totem. There was a fire next to us. It was getting more and more dangerous. We thought we were going to be killed by the Indians. But the chief of the tribe came to talk to us and it all came together. When we left, they offered their food and water, as well as covers of Buffalo skin."
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