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We were mainly interested in the Bengal tiger, also called the Royal Bengal tiger or the Indian Tiger, which is a large carnivorous mammal of the feline family. He's a subspecies of the Tiger.
The Royal Bengal tiger lives in India, Bangladesh, Nepal and Burma.
However, the Bengal tiger is a threatened species because its fur is very expensive. In addition, there would be only 1 500 felines left in freedom today.
China, Vietnam and Laos, along with Thailand, are the ones with the least wild tigers but are also the ones that allow livestock farms. Asia would have a little more than 200 in total, with within no less than 7 000 to 8 000 felines, or twice the wild population. The purpose of these farms is tourism and reintroduction in the wilderness, and informally the black market.
While it is difficult to estimate the exact share of these places in illegal trade, at least 30% of the seizures of tiger skins, bones and canines are from these farms.
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We were mainly interested in the Bengal tiger, also called the Royal Bengal tiger or the Indian Tiger, which is a large carnivorous mammal of the feline family. He's a subspecies of the Tiger.
The Royal Bengal tiger lives in India, Bangladesh, Nepal and Burma.
However, the Bengal tiger is a threatened species because its fur is very expensive. In addition, there would be only 1 500 felines left in freedom today.
China, Vietnam and Laos, along with Thailand, are the ones with the least wild tigers but are also the ones that allow livestock farms. Asia would have a little more than 200 in total, with within no less than 7 000 to 8 000 felines, or twice the wild population. The purpose of these farms is tourism and reintroduction in the wilderness, and informally the black market.
While it is difficult to estimate the exact share of these places in illegal trade, at least 30% of the seizures of tiger skins, bones and canines are from these farms.
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salut , je crois que c a peut près sa :
Nous nous sommes surtout intéressés au tigre du Bengale, également appelé tigre royal du Bengale ou tigre indien, qui est un grand mammifère carnivore de la famille des félins. Il est une sous-espèce du tigre.
Le tigre royal du Bengale vit en Inde, au Bangladesh, au Népal et en Birmanie.
Cependant, le tigre du Bengale est une espèce menacée car sa fourrure est très chère. De plus, il ne resterait que 1 500 félins en liberté aujourd'hui.
La Chine, le Vietnam et le Laos, ainsi que la Thaïlande, sont ceux qui comptent le moins de tigres sauvages, mais qui autorisent également les élevages. L'Asie aurait un peu plus de 200 au total, avec pas moins de 7 000 à 8 000 félins, soit le double de la population sauvage. Le but de ces fermes est le tourisme et la réintroduction dans la nature, et de manière informelle le marché noir.
S'il est difficile d'estimer la part exacte de ces lieux dans le commerce illégal, au moins 30% des saisies de peaux de tigre, d'os et de canines proviennent de ces exploitations.