Bonjour, est ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mon texte si besoin? Et traduire les phrases que je ne sais pas, que j'ai mis en commentaire? merci d'avance!

When I was young, I always played with my neighbor. One day, she invited my best friend and me ( à venir jouer). We were so happy. We didn't know what would happen. We were in her bedroom. We were playing quietly when we were hearing someone scream. We returned to ask my neighbor what it was. ( je veux dire par la : Nous nous sommes retourné pour demander à ma voisine ce que c'était) But, she was not there. We (descendu) in the garage to see where the noise came from. And then, a monster jumped on us! It was creepy. He had blood on his face. It was just my neighbor who wanted us to make a joke. We were afraid.