Bonjour, j'ai écris ce texte pour résumer le film "Jane Eyre" de Franco Zefirelli datant de 1996 mais je ne suis pas sûre de l'écriture, la tournure des phrases etc..
The film began with Jane Eyre, the main protagonist of the story
She is a 10 year old girl and lives with her aunt : Mrs Reed and her three cousins because whose parents died when she was an infant
Jane's mother was Mrs Reed late husband's sister
They don't like her and she doesn't like them because they are blatantly hostile and abuse her
Later, Jane is sent to Lowood school, a charity institution for orphans girls run by Mr Brokelhurt a cruel and odious minister
He says that Jane has a tendency to deceit
He punished Jane : He keeps the girl in starvation, she can'not speak with other girls and she must stand on a stool
He justifies his poor treatment of them by saying that they need to learn humility
Jane makes Friend with Helen burns but, unfortunettely, she dies of typhus probably due to those dreadful living conditions
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tracysehl
C'est mieux de dire "who lives with her aunt..." pour le contexte. "Her parents died when she was young" je pense que c'est mieux aussi "And abuse of her" c'est mieux de dire "A few months/days/years later, Jane is sent" selon la durée de l'ellipse.
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carlamarine31
Je vois, merci beaucoup je vais changer ça !
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"Her parents died when she was young" je pense que c'est mieux aussi
"And abuse of her"
c'est mieux de dire "A few months/days/years later, Jane is sent" selon la durée de l'ellipse.