Bonjour
J'ai écrit un texte en anglais ( ci-dessous) et j'aimerai savoir s'il y a des fautes ou des erreurs de formulation. Ce texte est une demande de location d'échange d'appartement.
Je remercie d'avance la personne qui saura m'aider.
Cordialement
Good evening Tina,
I hope you are doing well!
We are planning a trip to New York, between the 10th and the 20th of March. The photos of your beautiful apartment, your description, and the wonderful neighborhood really make me want to stay at your place.
I will be coming with my partner (an accountant). As for me, I work in real estate. We are both non-smokers and very respectful of others' property.
Hoping that Paris Trocadéro appeals to you, I offer you my apartment where I would be delighted to host you in return, either on the same dates or non-simultaneously if you prefer to come later.
I can also offer you Guest points.
I am also available to provide more information about us.
Hoping to receive your response soon.
I wish you a good day.
Thank you
J'ai écrit un texte en anglais ( ci-dessous) et j'aimerai savoir s'il y a des fautes ou des erreurs de formulation. Ce texte est une demande de location d'échange d'appartement.
Je remercie d'avance la personne qui saura m'aider.
Cordialement
Good evening Tina,
I hope you are doing well!
We are planning a trip to New York, between the 10th and the 20th of March. The photos of your beautiful apartment, your description, and the wonderful neighborhood really make me want to stay at your place.
I will be coming with my partner (an accountant). As for me, I work in real estate. We are both non-smokers and very respectful of others' property.
Hoping that Paris Trocadéro appeals to you, I offer you my apartment where I would be delighted to host you in return, either on the same dates or non-simultaneously if you prefer to come later.
I can also offer you Guest points.
I am also available to provide more information about us.
Hoping to receive your response soon.
I wish you a good day.
Thank you
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Dear Tina,
I trust this message finds you well.
We are currently planning a trip to New York from the 10th to the 20th of March. Your apartment, as showcased in the photos and described eloquently, has caught our attention. The appeal of your beautiful home and the charming neighborhood has truly captivated us.
My partner, who is an accountant, will accompany me. Personally, I work in real estate. We are both non-smokers and highly respectful of others' property.
If the idea of staying in Paris Trocadéro intrigues you, I would like to propose an apartment exchange. I would be delighted to host you in our place during the same dates or at a later time that suits you. Additionally, I am open to offering Guest points as a gesture of appreciation.
Feel free to reach out if you need more information about us.
Looking forward to your response.
Best regards.