Bonjour ! J'ai fais une petite réaction (250 mots) en anglais, est-ce que quelqu'un peut vérifier si j'ai fais des fautes s'il vous plaît ?

Question: Would you be ready to risk your life for your country? Why? Why not?

"In the 20th century, we had the first and the second wars. Since this time, the world has other enemies: the terrorist group. They are savages and barbarians. I do not want to live in a country with the fear to be a victim from a terrorist attack. I live in France. I do not live in Iraq or in Syria. I live in a free country, with honour and values: liberty, equality, fraternity. We fought for freedom, and we will fight for freedom again. When someone attack our France, that is mean there are attack us. I want a free country with no fears of terrorist attack for my dad, my mother, my brother, for my family and for future generations. We all have to stop this stupid war. We all have to contribute to the liberty. We all have to answer to these attacks. We all are proud of our country, we all have to defend it. We all have to risk our life for our country. We all have to take high our tricoloured flag. We all could lay down our life to protect two life. I am ready to risk my life for my country, to protect French peoples, to stop the war, to stop terrorist attacks on our own territory. In wartime, we cannot be narcissistic, think of ourselves before others. We are together. We are the freedom. We all can preserve our beautiful country, France, from blood. I live in France, I am French, and if I have to die for my country, France, I will die."