Bonjour, j'ai réaliser un échange de conversation entre un entrepreneur et un PDG. Cependant je doute et j'ai peur qu'il y ai des erreurs. (le plus important est de ce concentrer sur les sujets de l'entrepreneur ) Merci à vous par avance Bonne journée
Entrepreneur : I'm a linkster contractor in France since two years and I want to propose to create an online consignement store in France to facilitate trade.
PDG : I am very honored that you thought of my Coca Cola company for this project, in fact I am director since non fifteen years.
Entrepreneur :That is to say that, collaboring with you is for me a real challenge that I would like to achieve.
PDG : However, but since 2019 the soda market in France has deteriorated. Why take on such challenge ?
Entrepreneur : Although it, In two thousand twenty-one, the market of fizzy drinks made a profit of four hundred and ninety seven million and à growth of 7 percent in France
PDG : To illustrate my point, since COVID 19, the turnover of Coca Cola drinks in France has fallen sharply by four percent. An effective negociation implies a Win win collaboration, in fact, situations such as this one shouldn't exist .
Entrepreneur : This is looks disappointing indeed but I think we can get Best results. From the first month, one third of the price of the warehouse rental Will be at my expense. Besides, a french person consumes 22L of Coca cola per year.
PDG : as long as see an improvement in the implementation of this project over the next 3 months because I could not continue à no performing contract
Entrepreneur : according to me, a contract that can be terminated before three months is reasonable.
PDG : I'll get my assistant to arrange our next meeting.
Entrepreneur : We'll meet your requirements
PDG : I think we have a deal
Entrepreneur : Thanks for agreeing to meet me, have à Nice day
PDG : See you soon
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2eme dialogue : PDG: …since fifteen years(t’as ajouté “non”). 3ème dialogue: Entrepreneur: Exactly Sir, collaborating with you is like a big challenge for me that I’d like to achieve. 5ème dialogue: I perceive , although in 2021(twenty - twenty one) the market of fizzy drinks made a profit of $497M (four hundred and ninety seven million dollars) with 7% of growth in France. 8ieme dialogue: PDG: As long as I know, I want to see an improvement over the next 3 months , in the implementation of this project owing to the fact that I can’t continue my project if it’s not giving any results. Voilà c’est tout et pense aussi à changé tout les (à) en (a) si c’est un travail à rendre.
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3ème dialogue: Entrepreneur: Exactly Sir, collaborating with you is like a big challenge for me that I’d like to achieve.
5ème dialogue: I perceive , although in 2021(twenty - twenty one) the market of fizzy drinks made a profit of $497M (four hundred and ninety seven million dollars) with 7% of growth in France.
8ieme dialogue: PDG: As long as I know, I want to see an improvement over the next 3 months , in the implementation of this project owing to the fact that I can’t continue my project if it’s not giving any results.
Voilà c’est tout et pense aussi à changé tout les (à) en (a) si c’est un travail à rendre.