Bonjour, j'ai un exposé en anglais et voici ce que j'ai fait, j'aimerais savoir si vous pourriez me corrigez svp :
This photo is a selfie. It was taken during the Christmas Holidays by me with my phone. I took it in low angle shot.
I’m in my house, more precisely in my bedroom. In the background, we can see the ceiling and the wall. In the center, we could think the person we see is a crazy woman but no, it’s me.
As you can see, I’m posing for the selfie : i’m smiling and i’m doing a strange gesture with my fingers.
I’m wearing my white laboratory coat I usually use for the physical chemistry and biology courses at school. I have a grey headscarf on my head and a black scarf around my neck.
I also wearing a pair of yellow swimming goggles which belong to my younger sisters.
They are too tight for me, I was really suffering during the photo because of the elastic. I don’t know why I’m wearing this, but I find they are cool.
When I took this selfie, there was not precise event.
I chose this one because most of the time, I don’t take serious photos or photos when I’m with my family or friends. I don’t know why but I don’t like that.
I prefere to take this type of pictures, on which ones I’m not taking myself too seriously.
I took this picture on Snapchat and after that, I sent it to my friends as I often do it for this kind of photo because I’m not crazy enough to put it in my story.
merci beacoup d'avance
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LunityCoucouu! Ton texte était pas bourré de faute mais j'ai corrigé certaines erreurs quand même qui sont surtout pas rapport au sens owo
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This photo is a selfie. It was taken during the Christmas Holidays by myself with my phone. I took it in low angle shot.
I’m in my house, more precisely in my bedroom. In the background, we can see the ceiling and the wall. In the center, we could think that the person we can see is a crazy woman but no, it’s me.
As you can see, I’m posing for the selfie : i’m smiling and i’m doing a strange gesture with my fingers.
I’m wearing my white laboratory coat which I usually use for physical chemistry and biology courses at school. I have a grey headscarf on my head and a black scarf around my neck.
I'm also wearing a pair of yellow swimming goggles which belong to my younger sister.
They are too tight for me, I was really suffering when I was taking the picture because of the elastic. I don’t know why I was wearing them, maybe because I find them cool. When I took this selfie, there was not precise event.
I chose this one because most of the time, I don’t take serious photos or photos when I’m with my family or friends. I don’t know why but I don’t like that.
I prefer to take this type of pictures, the ones where I’m not taking myself too seriously.
I took this picture on Snapchat and after that, I sent it to my friends as I often do for this kind of photo because I’m not crazy enough to put it in my story.
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Lina69000
Merci énormément d’avoir pris le temps de tout bien réécrire et de m’avoir corriger!!!
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This photo is a selfie. It was taken during the Christmas Holidays by myself with my phone. I took it in low angle shot.
I’m in my house, more precisely in my bedroom. In the background, we can see the ceiling and the wall. In the center, we could think that the person we can see is a crazy woman but no, it’s me.
As you can see, I’m posing for the selfie : i’m smiling and i’m doing a strange gesture with my fingers.
I’m wearing my white laboratory coat which I usually use for physical chemistry and biology courses at school. I have a grey headscarf on my head and a black scarf around my neck.
I'm also wearing a pair of yellow swimming goggles which belong to my younger sister.
They are too tight for me, I was really suffering when I was taking the picture because of the elastic. I don’t know why I was wearing them, maybe because I find them cool.
When I took this selfie, there was not precise event.
I chose this one because most of the time, I don’t take serious photos or photos when I’m with my family or friends. I don’t know why but I don’t like that.
I prefer to take this type of pictures, the ones where I’m not taking myself too seriously.
I took this picture on Snapchat and after that, I sent it to my friends as I often do for this kind of photo because I’m not crazy enough to put it in my story.