Bonjour ! J'ai un soucis en anglais c'est que je fait souvent énormément de fautes !!!
Est ce que vous pourriez vérifier que mon texte sur un héro ne contient pas de fautes et qu'il est logique (grammaire).
MERCI D'AVANCE !!!

Voici le texte sur un héro (ici c'est Anne Frank):

My hero is Anne Frank. She was born in 1929 (one thousand nine hundred twenty nine).
She is a jewish girl whose her diary "The Diary of Anne Frank" is world-famous. She tells her story during the German occupation. For more than two years she hides in a fitted out atlic. But in 1944 (one thousand nine hundred forty four) they are denounced and deported.

Only Otto, his father followed. She died is sixteen years old. The house where it hidbecame a museum thanks to his father. His book was published and adapted to the cinema and in play.

I chose Anne Frank as heroe because she had a lot of talent and you should not forget him.

MERCI BEAUCOUP DE VOTRE AIDE !!!!!

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