Bonjour j'aurais besoin d'aide en anglais j'ai une rédaction à faire pour lundi , je dois raconter mes vacances d'été pendant c'est vacances d'été je n'ai casiment rien fais donc j'aurais besoin de quelqun qui puisse inventer des vacances d'été si possible en Algérie ou à Marseille au au état unis si il ya des gens qui connaissent bien le lieux . Là rédaction dois être rédiger au preterit et elle dois être moyennement longue.je n'ai pas vraiment beaucoup d'imagination et je suis nul en rédaction .là rédaction dois être détaillé c'est à dire les lieux les bâtiment visité etc et le ressenti aussi. Merci d'avance à toute les personnes qui m'aideront
First at all, I visited Los Angeles and I loved the streets. There were so many shops and people were so nice. It was sunny and I got sunsets. I really enjoyed this first day.
Then my family and I visited the Guetty Center. It is located just off the San Diego freeway, above Brentwood, in the Santa Monica mountains. The campus is home to the Getty Research Institute, the Getty Conservation Institute, the Getty Foundation and the J. Paul Getty Trust which is known to be the world’s largest philanthropic body dedicated to the visual arts.
On the afternoon we went to the Wizarding World of Harry Potter. It was handsome! I love Harry Potter and being in that place makes me cry! I was so happy and excited.
Furthermore, on the second day, we walked on the Walk of Fame and took so many pictures that my phone was dying. We also visited the Guinness World Records and Madame Tussauds museum. And to finish the day, we drove in Hollywood! We saw the letters on the mountain. It was on the evening so it was dark but it was unforgettable.
The third day was loaded because we went in Disneyland Park in the morning, the in Venice Beach (we walked near the sea!) and drove in Beverly Hills just like the Totally Spies.
To finish with we attended to a basketball game. I totally love it, it was such an experience because I have never been to any game.
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During my summer I went in California.
First at all, I visited Los Angeles and I loved the streets. There were so many shops and people were so nice. It was sunny and I got sunsets. I really enjoyed this first day.
Then my family and I visited the Guetty Center. It is located just off the San Diego freeway, above Brentwood, in the Santa Monica mountains. The campus is home to the Getty Research Institute, the Getty Conservation Institute, the Getty Foundation and the J. Paul Getty Trust which is known to be the world’s largest philanthropic body dedicated to the visual arts.
On the afternoon we went to the Wizarding World of Harry Potter. It was handsome! I love Harry Potter and being in that place makes me cry! I was so happy and excited.
Furthermore, on the second day, we walked on the Walk of Fame and took so many pictures that my phone was dying. We also visited the Guinness World Records and Madame Tussauds museum. And to finish the day, we drove in Hollywood! We saw the letters on the mountain. It was on the evening so it was dark but it was unforgettable.
The third day was loaded because we went in Disneyland Park in the morning, the in Venice Beach (we walked near the sea!) and drove in Beverly Hills just like the Totally Spies.
To finish with we attended to a basketball game. I totally love it, it was such an experience because I have never been to any game.