Bonjour j'aurais besoin d'aide en anglais j'ai une rédaction à faire pour mercredi , je dois raconter mes vacances d'été pendant c'est vacances d'été je n'ai casiment rien fais donc j'aurais besoin de quelqun qui puisse inventer des vacances d'été . Là rédaction dois être rédiger au preterit et elle dois être moyennement longue.je n'ai pas vraiment beaucoup d'imagination et je suis nul en rédaction . Merci d'avance à toute les personnes qui m'aideront
Last summer I went on holiday to New York with my sister We travelled by plane, and the journey was very tiring. We were really excited about visiting The Big Apple for the first time, so 14 hours seemed a long time.
We stayed in a hotel in Manhattan. We booked a room that wasn’t very big or bright, but it wasn’t expensive, and the best part is that the hotel was very close to Central Park. It was fantastic to get up in the morning and go running in the park before breakfast.
We did a lot of sightseeing; we visited all the most important buildings and museums in the city. And we also went on a helicopter tour. It was amazing! But the best thing for us was to walk around and watch the people, the cars, and the buildings. It was awesome !
hendanawar28
salut je reviens vers toi car le texte que tu m'a rédiger n'est pas assez détaillé et comme tu parle anglais jorer penser si tu pourrais plus le détaillé en disant les lieux les bâtiment que tu a vu tes ressenti si sa te dérange pas
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Bonsoir,
voilà une exemple :
Last summer I went on holiday to New York with my sister We travelled by plane, and the journey was very tiring. We were really excited about visiting The Big Apple for the first time, so 14 hours seemed a long time.
We stayed in a hotel in Manhattan. We booked a room that wasn’t very big or bright, but it wasn’t expensive, and the best part is that the hotel was very close to Central Park. It was fantastic to get up in the morning and go running in the park before breakfast.
We did a lot of sightseeing; we visited all the most important buildings and museums in the city. And we also went on a helicopter tour. It was amazing! But the best thing for us was to walk around and watch the people, the cars, and the buildings. It was awesome !
like et remercie si ça t'as aide !
bon courage