Bonjour je devais faire une lettre à ma meilleure amie en anglais pour lui parler de ma nouvelle école..pouvez vous me dire si elle est bien? et si il y a des fautes lequelles? Merci.
Hi Marie,
How are you ? Me i'm very fine ! There is one month ago, i integrated my new school « Welton Academy ». It's a super school,she's really big and very sophisticated and the cafeteria is different layout level but the food is good. I met my teachers in september and they had me at welcome result ! They had been very lenient with me,it's normal since i was the only new. I got a small group of friends and they are super nice and pretty. There are also many beautiful boy, I kept thinking about you ! I don't really like my class because they are just too noisy and i like the silence. I also wear a uniform of a shirt and skirt for girls and a shirt and pants for boys. Personally i find it really well !For now I love this school, but I expecte to see more. I hope everything is okay for you and for your family too ! I miss you so much and i'm waiting your news .
I love you, L xoxo.
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ElenaDu17
J'ai remplacé les fautes en les mettant en gras (peut-être que j'en ai sauté, mais j'ai mis le principal) :
Hi Marie,
How are you ? Me i'm very fine ! There is one month ago, i integrated my new school « Welton Academy ». It's a super school, it's really big and very sophisticated and the cafeteria is different layout level but the food is good. I met my teachers in september and they had me at welcome result ! They had been very lenient with me,it's ordinary since i was the only new. I got a small group of friends and they are super nice and cool. There are also many beautiful boy, I kept thinking about you ! I don't really like my class because they are just too noisy and i like the silence. I also wear a uniform (a shirt and skirt for girlsand a shirt and pants for boys). Personally i find it really well !For now I love this school, but I expecte to see more. I hope everything is okay for you and for your family too ! I miss you so much and i'm waiting your news .
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Hi Marie,
How are you ? Me i'm very fine ! There is one month ago, i integrated my new school « Welton Academy ».
It's a super school, it's really big and very sophisticated and the cafeteria is different layout level but the food is good.
I met my teachers in september and they had me at welcome result ! They had been very lenient with me,it's ordinary since i was the only new. I got a small group of friends and they are super nice and cool. There are also many beautiful boy, I kept thinking about you !
I don't really like my class because they are just too noisy and i like the silence. I also wear a uniform (a shirt and skirt for girls and a shirt and pants for boys). Personally i find it really well !For now I love this school, but I expecte to see more.
I hope everything is okay for you and for your family too !
I miss you so much and i'm waiting your news .
I love you, L xoxo.