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Every year, a Halloween party is organized by the town hall. All the inhabitants are invited, adults as children. But this year, nothing will happen as planned. The party started and the more time passed the more people had fun. The adults talked to each other and the children played and ran around the room.
When suddenly, the lights went out. After a minute in total darkness, the lights went back on and the first thing people have noticed is that the kids disappeared.
The parents, panicked, went in search of their children but all the doors are blocked. They tried several times but the doors didn’t want to open anymore. The parents called the town hall and the police but it didn’t work because there was no network.
They tried to go out the windows but they are too high.
All of a sudden, the children’s voices resonated in all the room.
The lights started to flicker increasing the fear of the inhabitants when all the windows broke into thousand piece as if something had hit them. The children reappeared in the shadows and didn’t give their parents time to push their last breath that they slaughtered them one by one, as if possessed by the spirits – or rather the demons – of Halloween.
Every year, a Halloween party is organized by the town hall. All the inhabitants are invited, adults as children. But this year, nothing will happen as planned. The party started and the more time passed the more people had fun. The adults talked to each other and the children played and ran around the room.
When suddenly, the lights went out. After a minute in total darkness, the lights went back on and the first thing people have noticed is that the kids disappeared.
The parents, panicked, went in search of their children but all the doors are blocked. They tried several times but the doors didn’t want to open anymore. The parents called the town hall and the police but it didn’t work because there was no network.
They tried to go out the windows but they are too high.
All of a sudden, the children’s voices resonated in all the room.
The lights started to flicker increasing the fear of the inhabitants when all the windows broke into thousand piece as if something had hit them. The children reappeared in the shadows and didn’t give their parents time to push their last breath that they slaughtered them one by one, as if possessed by the spirits – or rather the demons – of Halloween.
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Every year, a Halloween party is organized by the town hall. Every local habitants are invited, adults and children. But this year, nothing happened as planned. (Tu mélange du futur et du passé, pas bon). The party started and the more time passed the more people had fun. Adults spoke to each other and kids was playing and running all around the room.When suddenly, the lights went out. After a minute in total darkness, the lights came back on and the first thing people have noticed is that the kids disappeared.
The parents, terrorrised, started the research of their children but all doors were blocked. They tried several times but the doors didn’t want to open anymore. The parents called the town hall and the police but it didn’t work. The network seems to be down.
They tried to pass over the windows but they were too high.
All of a sudden, the children’s voices resonated in all the room.
The lights started to flicker increasing the fear of the inhabitants when all the windows broke into thousand pieceS as if something had hit them. The kids reappeared in the shadows and didn’t give their parents time to push their last breath that they slaughtered them one by one, as if possessed by the spirits – or rather the demons – of Halloween.
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