Bonjour, je recherche quelsqu'un de sérieux pour me corriger (sans réverso) et qui travail bien en anglais qui est capable de repérer des erreurs :

A young American man called Victor met a beautiful young
Spanish woman named Camila. They met in a tower in London (in
England) during the night. She had 23 years old and was the
girl of king Oscar IV. Oscar had bought a caste for himself
and he had also bought a tower for Camila. Victor was a
servant of the royal family and groom (for horses). Moreover, he was feel in love with
a young woman besides he had wanted to meet her.