bonjour, pourriez vous corriger mon texte qui est en anglais.
If I have to choose a house, I'd choose Jackman's. First of all, I would join this house because it is involved helping people with vision problems. Afterwards she fund the research and development. More over she collect money for eye specialists. They help integrating well into their living conditions. Finally it ensures a good atmosphere even if their condition is not ideal.
To put it in a nuttshell the house Jackman work with they people with vision problems. This self-help has given me much more and this a cause close to heart
Merci d'avance de votre aide.
If I have to choose a house, I'd choose Jackman's. First of all, I would join this house because it is involved helping people with vision problems. Afterwards she fund the research and development. More over she collect money for eye specialists. They help integrating well into their living conditions. Finally it ensures a good atmosphere even if their condition is not ideal.
To put it in a nuttshell the house Jackman work with they people with vision problems. This self-help has given me much more and this a cause close to heart
Merci d'avance de votre aide.
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If I have to choose a house, I'd choose Jackman's. First of all, I would join this house because it is involved with helping people with vision problems. Afterwards, she fund the research and development. Moreover, she collects money for eye specialists. They help integrating well into their living conditions. Finally, it ensures a good atmosphere even if their condition is not ideal.
To put it in a nutshell the house Jackman work with they people with vision problems. This self-help has given me much more and this a cause close to heart