Bonjour, pourriez-vous corriger mon texte svp (et l’améliorer si possible, merci.)


El acoso es el acto de herir a una persona mental o físicamente en el ensayo.
el acoso nos afecta a todos, de una forma u otra. Usted puede ser acosado, acosado o presenciado el acoso.
Debemos actuar. Si estamos siendo acosados, necesitamos hablar con un adulto responsable en quien confiamos. Una simple palabra puede salvar una vida, muchas víctimas de acoso terminan suicidándose; según UNICEF, uno de cada tres niños es víctima de acoso (a menudo en la escuela).
Si somos acosadores, debemos ser conscientes de lo que hacemos, de lo que hacemos. A menudo, estas personas no se dan cuenta de que están acosando a otros.
Si somos testigos de acoso, debemos actuar más rápidamente informando de lo que hemos visto a un adulto responsable en quien confiamos.
Si no conocemos a ningún adulto responsable en quien confiemos, podemos llamar al 119, que es un número para víctimas de acoso. Una persona nos escuchará y nos ayudará.
A menudo olvidamos que la mejor manera de vencer el acoso y la amistad. Tener un amigo puede ayudarnos a hablar sobre nuestra situación de acoso.
Un amigo es una persona con quien tenemos una relación especial, en quien confiamos, con quien compartimos momentos especiales, un amigo que nos respeta y nos apoya.

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