Bonjour, pourriez-vous me corriger se dialogue d'anglais qui ne doit pas être très anglais!!! le thème est une maman énervée contre ses enfants qui sont tous le temps sur leur portable et qui critique leur mère. E1: I hate my old phone! E2: You schould ask mum for a new mobile phone. (la mère arrive les enfants l'entendent) E1: Oh shit mum's arrive! (elles planquent leurs telephone sous leurs cours) M: You have not been cleaning the kitchen? E2: But we have lot of homework!!! M: Are you kidding me? You have your phones ender your boooks! I will take it and keep it! E2: But we... E1: It's so unfair, we have just send one message! M: This is not a reason! I want you to go to your bedroom, now!!! (j'arrive dans leur chambre) M: And on top of that your bedroom is dirty!!! E2: It's not our fault, it's cat fault. M: I exept you to clean your bedroom for I preparthe diner (la mère descend dans la cuisine pendant ce temps la dans la chambre) E1: Mum's is creasy! We have been working all day!
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E1: I hate my old phone! E2: You should ask mum to buy a new mobile phone. (the mother come in the room and the children hear her) E1: Shit, mum's come here! (they hide their phone under their book) M: You didn't clean the kitchen? E2: Sorry mom, but we have lot of homework!!! M: Are you kidding me? I see your phones under your boooks! I will take it and keep it! E2: But we... E1: It's so unfair, we have just send one message! M: This is not a reason! I want you to go to your bedroom, now!!! She yelled. (the mother come in their bedroom) M: And on top of that your bedroom is dirty!!! E2: It's not our fault, it's cat fault. M: I exept you to clean your bedroom! I will prepar the diner (the mother goes down to the kitchen) E1: Mum's is so crazy! We have been working all day!
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E2: You should ask mum to buy a new mobile phone.
(the mother come in the room and the children hear her)
E1: Shit, mum's come here!
(they hide their phone under their book)
M: You didn't clean the kitchen?
E2: Sorry mom, but we have lot of homework!!!
M: Are you kidding me? I see your phones under your boooks! I will take it and keep it!
E2: But we...
E1: It's so unfair, we have just send one message!
M: This is not a reason! I want you to go to your bedroom, now!!! She yelled.
(the mother come in their bedroom)
M: And on top of that your bedroom is dirty!!!
E2: It's not our fault, it's cat fault.
M: I exept you to clean your bedroom! I will prepar the diner
(the mother goes down to the kitchen)
E1: Mum's is so crazy! We have been working all day!
Bonne soirée!