Bonjour pourriez-vous s'il-vous-plaît me venir en aide je dois faire un journal de vacance en ANGLAIS. Ci-dessous j'ai écrit le déroulement de mes vacances en français. Pourriez-vous s'il-vous-plaît me venir en aide car je dois tous rédiger en Anglais tout en respectant toute les consignes demandées ci dessous en pièces jointe, merci beaucoup .
Pendant mes vacances, je suis allé 4 jours chez mes grands parents à Nice, avec ma famille. Le matin je me réveiller à 9h00, je prenais mon petit déjeuner devant un dessins animés. Après cela je lisais mon livre de manga. L'après-midi Nous sortions tous ensemble en famille, nous nous sommes promener sur promenade des anglais et comme il faisait très beau nous avons profiter de la plage. Mon frère et moi avons construit des châteaux de sable, ramasser des coquillages et nous avons jouer au volley, Il y avait beaucoup de monde, s'était très agréable. Le lendemain nous sommes allés faire du shopping, l'après-midi nous somme allés au cinéma et le soir nous avons manger au restaurant avec mes grands parents, s'était délicieux. Les jours suivants nous sommes rentrés à la maison. J'étais un peu déçu, car les 4 jours sont très vite passée chez mes grands parents. De retour à la maison, je me suis reposer et j'ai fait la grasse matinée. Le jour suivant je me suis réveiller à 8h00, j'ai pris mon petit déjeuner, après cela avec mon frère et nos amis Lucas et Paolo, nous sommes allés à notre entrainements de football, nous avons fait beaucoup d'exercices d'étirement et du footing, ensuite à midi nous sommes allés avec nos amis manger des tacos ont s'est régaler. L'après-midi j'ai fait une petite sieste. Un peu plus tard dans la journée j'ai commencé à faire une partie de mes devoirs, ensuite à 16h30 j'ai pris mon goûter et nous sommes allés voir avec mon frère et nos amis un match de football. Le lendemain nous avons fait une sortie avec le foyer Wallon nous sommes allés au bowling, j'étais très content car j'ai gagné 4 parties sur 5 contre mon frère. Les jours suivants, le matin j'effectuer mes devoirs, après cela quand je terminer, je jouer pendant 45 minutes avec mon amis Nawfel à la PlayStation au jeux de foot et de mincraft. L'après-midi nous sortions tous ensemble pour aller au parc, nous jouions au football et basket. J'ai également fait du Vélo. j'ai passé de très bonnes vacances.
During my vacation, I went to Nice to visit my grandparents with my family for four days. In the mornings, I would wake up at 9:00, have breakfast while watching cartoons, and then read my manga book. In the afternoons, we would go out together as a family and take a walk on the Promenade des Anglais, and since it was very sunny, we took advantage of the beach. My brother and I built sand castles, collected seashells, and played volleyball. There were a lot of people, and it was very enjoyable. The next day, we went shopping, went to the cinema in the afternoon, and had dinner with my grandparents in the evening, which was delicious. The following days, we went back home. I was a bit disappointed because the four days with my grandparents went by very quickly. Once I was back home, I rested and slept in. The next day, I woke up at 8:00, had breakfast, and then went to football training with my brother and our friends Lucas and Paolo. We did a lot of stretching exercises and went for a run. At noon, we went to eat tacos with our friends, and they were delicious. In the afternoon, I took a nap. Later in the day, I started to work on some homework, and at 4:30, I had a snack and then went to watch a football match with my brother and our friends. The following day, we went on an outing with the Wallon group to go bowling, and I was very happy because I won four out of five games against my brother. In the following days, I would do my homework in the morning, and when I was finished, I would play football and Minecraft on PlayStation with my friend Nawfel for 45 minutes. In the afternoons, we would go out together to the park and play football and basketball. I also rode my bike. Overall, I had a great vacation.
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During my vacation, I went to Nice to visit my grandparents with my family for four days. In the mornings, I would wake up at 9:00, have breakfast while watching cartoons, and then read my manga book. In the afternoons, we would go out together as a family and take a walk on the Promenade des Anglais, and since it was very sunny, we took advantage of the beach. My brother and I built sand castles, collected seashells, and played volleyball. There were a lot of people, and it was very enjoyable. The next day, we went shopping, went to the cinema in the afternoon, and had dinner with my grandparents in the evening, which was delicious. The following days, we went back home. I was a bit disappointed because the four days with my grandparents went by very quickly. Once I was back home, I rested and slept in. The next day, I woke up at 8:00, had breakfast, and then went to football training with my brother and our friends Lucas and Paolo. We did a lot of stretching exercises and went for a run. At noon, we went to eat tacos with our friends, and they were delicious. In the afternoon, I took a nap. Later in the day, I started to work on some homework, and at 4:30, I had a snack and then went to watch a football match with my brother and our friends. The following day, we went on an outing with the Wallon group to go bowling, and I was very happy because I won four out of five games against my brother. In the following days, I would do my homework in the morning, and when I was finished, I would play football and Minecraft on PlayStation with my friend Nawfel for 45 minutes. In the afternoons, we would go out together to the park and play football and basketball. I also rode my bike. Overall, I had a great vacation.