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CONSIGNE en anglais je dois faire un débat où je dois répondre à la question quel est le responsable de l'obésité ? le gouvernement où les personnes ? j'ai choisi le gouvernement et mon rôle c'est une personne qui aime les fast food.
MON TEXTE : Hello I introduce myself I'm ***** and I love junk food, I eat there almost every day. I find fast food very convenient for people who don't have time to cook in more it is delicious but I have healthy problems because of my obesity. In adults there are thirty seven percent obsessed in the USA, the government is responsible for obesity in America because there is a high production of food which insists on the USA to consume there's a lot of fast food on the streets of the USA. Children eat too much in the canteens and do little sport. And to finish most of there foods are too fat and sugar and are modified whith chemicals.
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Réponse : their foods are too fat and sugar and is modified with chemicals.
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ton texte est bien