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Vinny went to see his father in his office at New York, he was very anxious. Before go to see his godfather, he was angrily when he discovered a newspaper clipping by her mother. He twisted his lips while reading "handing it to vinny", it read "As the Italian Mafia Grows, So Do the Bosses. But he knowed, that her mother protected him, hiding them. As consequently, did not want it to her mother. Vinny arrived at the immense building ...He arrived at the immense building, he entered, and saw his father whisper with someone.
"Hello Dad, i am so happy to meet you, after all this years your absence, occupied to kill"
"Hello my successor, we can't spend all that time on this, he answered dryly. it was just my choice"
His father without saying a word frowned, narrowed his eyes and the man went out without nothing say.
" i am afraid not, you're just selfish"
"Really?" he laughed
"you see, you're lost, you have not friend, your life is pointless like you. you not know what are you doing" Vinny answered hopelessly
" No No!!! by making a sign of head." he murmured:"you are wrong! "
vinny shouted " why" ?
"i am businessman, my money by supplying a public demand. people loves me. And you, you become my successor!!" he added:"it was agreed that way, with your mother"
"Er...?" vinny stiffly gazed at his father
"oh sorry, to tell you that. I didn't knew that your mother you hid" replied his father quietly
"you lie to me!! all is wrong ! mom is not like you !" he started to yell
"i think that no! it's the truth. so i don't have all my time with you. i am sonny denucci, the godfather who took over the new york mafia crime family" his father was proud
"you are the murderer" vinny answered loudly
"our inside sources say that when you are ready, i retired from my routine local dealings and will pass the torch to you. You have lot of things to learn"
"I disagree with you! i will not spoil my life! looking(cherche) for someone else and forget me!" vinny was rude and very angrily
His father looked him, folded his arms and frowned
"i will not to resume these fonction! i am not a criminal like you! and i do not care the business"( je me fiche) vinny begged his father to return in his home
"listening, his father murmured and warned vinny. i have lost lots of time. i have two propositions, either you come with me and we will become the best family business or i killed you with your mother.
so take the good choice!
His father left the office and vinny was hopeless, very anxious like his arrived. he snapped back " goes to hell"
Vinny went to see his father in his office at New York, he was very anxious. Before go to see his godfather, he was angrily when he discovered a newspaper clipping by her mother. He twisted his lips while reading "handing it to vinny", it read "As the Italian Mafia Grows, So Do the Bosses. But he knowed, that her mother protected him, hiding them. As consequently, did not want it to her mother. Vinny arrived at the immense building ...He arrived at the immense building, he entered, and saw his father whisper with someone.
"Hello Dad, i am so happy to meet you, after all this years your absence, occupied to kill"
"Hello my successor, we can't spend all that time on this, he answered dryly. it was just my choice"
His father without saying a word frowned, narrowed his eyes and the man went out without nothing say.
" i am afraid not, you're just selfish"
"Really?" he laughed
"you see, you're lost, you have not friend, your life is pointless like you. you not know what are you doing" Vinny answered hopelessly
" No No!!! by making a sign of head." he murmured:"you are wrong! "
vinny shouted " why" ?
"i am businessman, my money by supplying a public demand. people loves me. And you, you become my successor!!" he added:"it was agreed that way, with your mother"
"Er...?" vinny stiffly gazed at his father
"oh sorry, to tell you that. I didn't knew that your mother you hid" replied his father quietly
"you lie to me!! all is wrong ! mom is not like you !" he started to yell
"i think that no! it's the truth. so i don't have all my time with you. i am sonny denucci, the godfather who took over the new york mafia crime family" his father was proud
"you are the murderer" vinny answered loudly
"our inside sources say that when you are ready, i retired from my routine local dealings and will pass the torch to you. You have lot of things to learn"
"I disagree with you! i will not spoil my life! looking(cherche) for someone else and forget me!" vinny was rude and very angrily
His father looked him, folded his arms and frowned
"i will not to resume these fonction! i am not a criminal like you! and i do not care the business"( je me fiche) vinny begged his father to return in his home
"listening, his father murmured and warned vinny. i have lost lots of time. i have two propositions, either you come with me and we will become the best family business or i killed you with your mother.
so take the good choice!
His father left the office and vinny was hopeless, very anxious like his arrived. he snapped back " goes to hell"
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Vinny went to see his father in his office at New York, he was very nervous. Before visiting his godfather, he was angry when he discovered a newspaper clipping (coupure de journaux) kept by her mother. He twisted his lips while reading "handing it to Vinnie", it read "As the Italian Mafia Grows, So Do the Bosses. But he knew that her mother protected him, hiding them. Consequently, he did not want to blame her mother. Vinny arrived at the immense building ...He arrived at the huge building, he entered, and saw his father whispering with someone.
"Hello Dad, I am so happy to meet with you, after all these years your absence, you must have benn too occupied to kill"
"Hello my successor, we can't spend all that time on this, he answered dryly. it was just my choice"
His father without saying a word frowned, narrowed his eyes and the man went out with nothing to say.
" I am not afraid, you're just selfish"
"Really?" he laughed
"you see, you're lost, you have no friends, your life is pointless like you. you do not know what you are doing" Vinny answered hopelessly
" No No!!! by nodding his head." he whispered:"you are wrong! "
Vinny shouted " why" ?
"I am businessman, my money by supplying a public demand. People love me. And you, you become my successor!!" he added:"It was agreed that way, with your mother"
"her...?" Vinny stiffly gazed at his father
"Oh sorry, to have to say that. I didn't know that your mother you hid" replied his father quietly
"you lie to me!! all is wrong ! mom is not like you !" he started to yell
"I think that no! it's the truth. so i don't have all my time with you. i am Sonny Denucci, the godfather who took over the New York mafia crime family" his father was proud.
"you are a murderer" Vinny answered loudly
"our inside sources say that when you are ready, i retired from my routine local dealings and will pass the torch to you. You have lot of things to learn"
"I disagree with you! I will not spoil my life! looking for someone else and forget me!"Vinny was rude and very angry.
His father looked at him, folded his arms and frowned
"i will not to resume these fonctions! i am not a criminal like you! and i do not care the business"( je me fiche) vinny begged his father to return in his home
"listening, his father murmured and warned vinny. i have lost lots of time. i have two propositions, either you come with me and we will become the best family business or i killed you with your mother.
so take the good choice!
His father left the office and vinny was hopeless, very anxious like his arrived. he snapped back " goes to hell"