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A young American man called Victor met a
beautiful young Spanish woman named Camila. They
met in a tower in London (in England) during the night. She had
23 years old and was the girl of king Oscar IV. Oscar had
bought a caste for himself and he had also bought a tower for
Camila. Victor was a servant of the royal family and groom (for
horses). Moreover, he feel in love with a young woman besides
he had wanted to meet her. Victor came back a horse riding, he
returned in the stable and perceived Camila who chucking her
horse. The weather has cold then the youngster him lent his
jacket afterwards, he saw back toward her majestical tower
under the middle moon. Victor exited the torch of his pocket
to light the way, some shadows leaped out under the form
however the big bad wolf. They passionately in love that the
time stopped, one second seemed like as eternity on the clock.
Directly, on the way, they observed a road sign over the arrow
indicating the direction of the tower. During the route, they
discussed and arrived in front of the door (of the tower), he
took the key, put in the lock and turned by means of his wrist.
Similarly, they went up the staircases, came the fire of the
chimney through the royal door. As a conclusion, they decided
carried on with their conversations, later. However, a beautiful
day, a both adults got married and lived happily ever after.